Add something to this please

This is one of my new skins, the twins (or one of them) in the Matrix Reloaded. It's not finished, and I know currently it looks sort of dumb. It's not meant to look real, more cartoon-y then anything.
Five points for the first person who adds an alpha channel to this tga and gives me a screenshot, ten points to anyone who model edits it to look more like one of the Twins.

Oh yes, and criticism is welcome.

Thats the worst skin ever.

Seriously, this is a joke right?

It Looks Like A Skinning Guide!!!!!!

i could give you a screenshot if you gave me the name of the model it uses.....

wtf?????? is that??? u really got it messed up dude........no shading...And u even blacked out body parts so wehn its ingame all u see are black

i think that is the paladin arthas or admiral proudmorre

It Will Fit On Arthas, Blood Mage, And Admiral

welllllll........................ Here is your skin on proudmoore.

and here is your skin in .blp format w/an alpha channel.

Yea

Cool

dam..that skin really umm...
i'm juss not gonna say it.. lock this thread its spam

I love that all three of them use the same Uvwrapping (almost)

if your going to do critistism do it constructively.

However Doomsandwitch, just like your other skins you need to use multible colours and shading effects to make your skins look like the pros. check out some more skinning guides.

i dont understand why they have black peices everywhere and it just looks blocky no roundness to it which it deperatly needs

It isn't finished, everybody. The skin is for the blood mage, and please, only one person do the skin. No, this isn't a joke, it isn't finished. Shading? Yes, it needs work. I'm skinning in the dark here, because the program I'm using doesn't support alpha channels. I mainly posted that because I wanted to see what it looks like.

EDIT: My computer just showed the pictures, and, I admit, they're FBEEPING HIDEUS! BLBLBLBLBLBLBLBLBLBBABLBALBLABALBABBALBAB!

I need help to make them look like the twins. Serious help.

Suggestions?

Oh, and Ra: No, it's not spam, the entire point is for me to get a good look at what my skin is like ingame or at least on a model and how to improve on it. So no, nobody lock this.