My world map

I´m curretly working on a map, featureing a custom world. I did it before, but that became sh*t. It´s a very Tolkien-like map, with many cultures. I´m just begun, but I have a vision of it. I will use custom skills and abillieties. I have just finish the Pul-jarhim region. It´s a little place with a tomp den, guarded by strong warriors. Does my map sounds good?

I have canceled the project and I wonna make a RPG instead.