First Skin, Ice Paladin

Hi
This is my first skin, I think it turned out very well, cc please.
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heres my crit

I could see a little, put then it went to Red x.. so.. sorry, i cant comment.

Ok, retry this time, it should work

looks good, but shoulderpads, head, and the front of the maul don't fit!

That kinda look like Radin from Mortal Kombat.

or it looks like a Thunder Mage.either way GOOD JOB:D

Ok, I've updated the Skin on what I have done so far, as in changed the maul. cc please.

woops forgot to add it :-p

thats not bad at all. upper legs need some work.

Maul still looks weird imho

Why do you think the Maul looks weird, i think it looks good

maybe because of the black areas, but its probably just the wrapping. 2nd version much better imo.

I think it has great potential, but it needs some work. The stripy hammer handle looks a bit weird. I'd also add some frosty effects to the book cover. 6.5/10, for now.