learning to draw anime/manga style...

ive posted these around before, but i would rather put them where ill get sme good comments/crits. after seeing all the great artists around here, i decided that i wanted to try and draw some anime-type stuff. so here goes...

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[edit] to big, ill scale down and re-post...

manageable size...

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is this you trying to learn how to draw anime or you trying to show others how to draw it.

if it is you trying to teach other's. its a bad tutorial. <-- no offense

if it is you trying to learn how to draw anime on your own, then your making good progress.

You need to learn to draw realisticly before you learn how to draw unrealisticly.

just what i was gonna say. once you can do perfect human anatomy in life drawing, then you'll find distorted anime and cartoons to be much easier.

i learned to draw manga there http://www.howtodrawmanga.com/tutorial/tutorial.html its a nice site wit a free tutorial and even galleries of ppl posting there work

They look hasty, maybe take more time? I aint a really good artist, but more good ones i see around here say take a long time to draw it, hten the next time you draw manga draw it faster.

what really disterbes me is the hair and the eyes... the eyes look a bit blurry and weird, they need to be sharper.. eyes are the key to a nice anime face.. and the hair too..the hair u drew looks like a bunch of sea-weed draped over a head... imagine the hairs actually coming out of the head and follow their flow...

omg..

i'm babling again..