Sounds great - you're really trying to do the voice and it shows. Though it doesn't sound like Antonidas, it does sound like an elderly archmage type of voice. :)
Note: I listened to it on cheap speakers so I'm not certain about the quality. Will double check when I get back to my main computer.
I began with a Dynamic-Graphic in Sound Forge to 'even out' the waveform. I tried doing a noise reduction, but there wasn't much blank audio (background noise) so I just used some of it at the start. That was in CE. Then I did another Dynamic-Graphic and pitched it.