Factory WIP

The factory skin I've been working on for quite some time. Definately not finished. Constructive critisime plz.

looks like something that would be good 4 that mecha campaign that other skinner waz workin on.

not bad...nice to see building skins...

I like it alot !!
perhaps u could put up the contrast a bit, so it looks better from farther away!
but really nice !

Change or remove the team color.
Make the plates different colors. Like different shades of grey. The buttom looks bad the loop edges change it.

Updated: Incressed contrast and fixed minor alpha problems. Skinned a little more.

Completed! Here's the factory...

...the lab (need a better name)...

...and the machine house (also needs a better name)

I'd change the team colors into, say, streaks of color over certain parts of the skin, or something. Secondly, I think the alpha effects at the very bottom of the model looks kinda strange, I'd change that into something more machine-like. Also give it some color here and there to break the gray monotomy of the skin, like on the towers and along the edges of structures or something like that.

Grrrr... KavuRider bumped this thread down :nono:
anyways, I don't plan on changing the bottom or the color (I want the bottom smooth and it to be almost completely monotone) but I will work on the team coulor.