More composing madness

Here is a track I can use some feedback on: http://tavern.gameproc.com/Haunting_Main.mp3

It is obviously for a dark mooded something something. What do you think? What could be improved?

PS: If you got an mp3 to show mabye it is a good idea to post those all in 1 thread? That is one's you composed yourself

interesting. kinda eerie in the 'cliche horror film' kind of sense.

That's what I was trying to achieve, that cliche sense.

^_^ you did a good job...except, every other second when the symbol crashes in the middle, it sounds kinda akward....i dont know, maybe a more low-pitched crash, or maybe not stopping the other music for it

Yeah someone suggested that to me as well, I will probably re-write a portion.