Eternities End (need good team)

This is the basic history, the story will be based on the war in the mortal realm. I wrote this myself, and hope you like it, I will need all the help i can get.

In the beging, there was nothing but the elemental spirits, Order, Chaos, Fire, Thunder,
Forest, Water, and above all, Power........
The spirit of power came upon concious, which transformed him into a great being, Xenjya.
He tought the other spirits concious as well, and the became powerful to, Excell, Crestes,
Drakiel, Ardial, Lindlashay, and minla.
Xenjya became bored dwelling in nothingness, so he gathered all his might and power, and
crafted two realms, the heavens, and the abyss. The heavens, a tranquil place of peace and
prosperity, and the abyss, a swirling chaos of nothing.
After a milenea, Xenjya had grown bored again, and created man, to watch grow in the
paradise of heaven. Crestes, growing jealous of his bretheren's power, brought death upon man,
Xenjya was outraged, and sent Crestes to be forever banished in the realm of the abyss. The other
gods, terrorfied of Xenjya's power, united, and waged war, to ensure that no more of them would
ever be banished to the abyss. Xenjya gathered his creation of man, and headed to a far corner of
the heavens, and built a great stronghold.
Excell, realizing that they were greatly out numbered, created the Lom'Aire, the servants
of heaven and order, to wage war upon Xenjya. Xenjya was crushed by the other gods, and banished
forever, to join Crestes in the chaotic abyss.
Man, being Xenjya's creation, could no longer reside in paradise, so the remaining five
gods, gathered their power, and created a third realm, the mortal realm...
Excell sent man to the new world, a prison for man. The world began to grow, and became
buetiful, man had shaped and created many new things. They began to worship Excell as the
most powerful God, the King above all, and his servants the named Angels, who were great figures
of peace and life to them. Xenjya became aware of this, and grew more and more insane....
He began searching the Abyss for the one he had forsakened, Crestes...to plot invasion of
the Heavens. Together, they crafted a vicous race of demons, the Mere'Dor. Xenjya crafted a great
guanlet, which would hold a great armor, Fthwakthey'Mere. He forged a great sword to be the key
to unlock the armor from the guanlet, which with his great power, he created out of pure diamond.
Xenjya was ready to wage his war upon the heavens, and the heavens shall be devastated by war.
The Lom'Aire, living in peace for thousands of years, were overwhelmed with deaths when
the Mere'Dor first appeared. The Lom'Aire fled to the last heavenly kingdom to reside with the
Gods. The great fortress, being the same that Xenjya's men built, was only a last fragment of the
great armies of the heavens. The Mere'Dor marched upon the citedal, ready to at last have victory
after a long campaign of hundreds of years.
Battle broke out, and at first outnumbered, the Lom'Aire seemed victorious, but then the
darkness came.......A great dark figure appeared on the battlefield, dressed in a great armor of
black iron, holding a great sword, made of pure diamond...Xenjya had returned to his creation.
He slashed at the Lom'Aire, killing hundreds with a swing, his magics could blast many to their
deaths, victory was near for Xenjya. He had made his way up his mystical fortress, and ready to
destroy his bretheren for damning him, opened the great gate, but something happened then, he did
not intend. Excell, dressed in pure platinum, holding a great maul, smashed Xenjya back to the
abyss, in a great catacalysm blast. He sent the Mere'Dor back to where they came, and cursed
Xenjya and his minions. He took away the natural senses, he guaged their eyes out, cut out there
tonges, chopped their ears off, and took away all thier feeling...Nothing so damned could ever
pass through the gates of heaven again.....

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Xenjya, with all his power, crafted the new senses for his damned people...He gave them
telepathic powers, so they would never need the old senses, again...
Fthwakthey'mere was left in the heavens, along with its key, and were sent to the mortal
realm, to be forever protected in a secret tomb, never to be reached by Xenjya again....
To protect the weapon, the gods crafted new races to reside in the mortal plains, Minla,
created the Toa'Ruhn, these people would rule the seas, Lindlashay, with her grace and buety,
created the Elves, peoples of the forest, Ardial, created minitaurs, great beasts with the
strength to harness the thunder, and Drakiel, created Dwarves, the miners and craftsman of the
mountains. Excell claimed the humans as his own, to forever reside in the plains of order....
Each god entrusted a sacred stone to each race, Minla created Amu'Hn, the stone of the
Sea, Lindlashay created Reluoshe, stone of the Earth, Ardial, created Uman'Eli, stone of the Sky,
Drakiel crafted Gun'halid, stone of the sky, and Excell, king of the heavens, above all else,
created Lunarey stone of Order......



There will be 8 races, sorted into alliances, basically, you got the horde, made of orcs, trolls, and taurens, so like that. they are:
Elves Humans Dwaves Minitaurs Toa'Ruhn (naga)
Orcs Dark Elves Undead

Maybe more, still editing story, you can contact me at [email protected] or xenjya gop on AIM or just pm me.

lol ur using ur name for a character... ur the guys that full insulted warcrafters ideas hey?

The story sounds relly good but you shoulden't use ur own name as main chartaer

haha, i made this story up before i made this account name, i got the name from my story.

ok well it sounds real good man =)

That is just the legend, the story will be about t he world coming to the end, Xenjya and Crestes sent their most vile races to destroy the mortal realm, and enslave Xenjya's creation man.
Merith, a young warrior, rallies a small force, and leads them on a quest to find a fabled weapon of great power (ends up to be Fthwakthey'mere, Xenjya's armor and sword).

Don't take this personally, but Fthwakthey'Mere sounds like a name Terry Pratchett would use. In case you don't know his (totally hilarious) books, he writes (among other things) parodies of high fantasy.

I've never understood the need to invent words and name completely unfamiliar to the reader just for the sake of it sounding exotic and mystic. Tolkien, who was a philologist since his youth, based a lot of his works on his languages, which were well thought out, consistent and actually speakable. Names in his books mean something, they're not just (like in the books of the thousands of people who tried to emulate him) random assortments of vowels that makes the story hard to follow. If one cannot acheive that degree of consistency, which greatly helps suspend disbelief, I believe one is better off using names the reader can pronounce and remember.

Now that I've ranted enough about that pet p of mine: If you're trying to gather team members, I'd suggest showing off some finished wc3 work, or at least a detailed design document. What you have below doesn't seem that easy (at least to me) to translate into a wc3 experience worth persuing. You'll have a much easier time recruiting people if you show them you have skills and patience.

K, well, here is my dwarven warrior, screen was done on paint, so plz don't critizize the quality, couldn't get rid of the background either, well, no skin on him yet, but i will get one soon.

Well maybe i can skin him =)

He doesnt look like a dwarf
More of a barbarian.

well, if we do this campaign, and finish it of course, we could do another campaign, history on the dark elves:D , trust me, that story sounds better so far, but wouldn't make sense to do it without doing eternities end first, so sry dark wars, you will have to waitemote_confused

Cool model, but isn't the poly count terribly high for wc3?

If you want a triggerer i can do that for you. :D