Champion Skin 2 - Gaea's Champion

Yes, it's a bit out of my originally planned order, I know, but I got stuck on my Angelic Champion one.:bgrun:

Anywho, for those of you just tuning in, I'm making a skin pack of 'Champion' units...essentially different types of elemental heroes.

Currently Completed Champions
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Elvish Champion

All of these skins will be for public download when I finish. Anywho, onto the skin.

My basic idea here was to try my hand at a sort of (non night)elf demon hunter, that was not evil/corrupted and was more spiritual and naturally oriented. So here's my initinal draft.

Skin Points
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+ Redrawn Hair look really good in my opinion.:D
+ Vines across chest seems to be a stroke of genious
- The face/eyes is/are a little off center.
- The face is a little too blurry/pale, in my opinion.
- The boots could have been better, but I was out of ideas.

Alright guys, here's where you help me out. ;) I have faith that you guys will give me some really good criticism like you did on my Elf (the support from Ravan and Egg in particular helped :ggani: ), so please, work your critical magic everyone! Remember what my Elf looked like in the begining? :////

Ahhh its pretty good... The DH is easy todo once u understand the wrap.

It looks way to bright it hurts my eyes Use some shadeing tools.

The textures are kinda unrealistic on pants make your own it takes time but the results at times are 10x better.

Show some definition on the pants.

Definition on skin.

And i can show you something to fix the placement of the eyes.

Alright, uhm...thanks, uh, Sansui...thats, uh...some criticism, I guess.:ggani:

I made him so pale (and apparently bright) because Elves are supposed to be a bit on the pale side, but I guess he could use some color... I'm just gonna ignore the bit about the pants cause I think the leaf texture looks really good on them... In any case, thanks for taking interest in my skin. :ggani:

Revision 1
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Redid chest texture from scratch instead of just smudging the marks off of the DH and recoloring it (as I did in draft 1).

Changed skin tone to more pink-ish/human skin.

Narrowed eyes.

Move the pupil closer to the nose. and maybe a lil smaller.


Touch up the vines on the chest dsrken the edges of it on the skin to make it look more like they are on the skin and not part of it.


I still dont like the pants and boots. atleast try to make it your own texture i guess if you wanna keep it the way it is.

maybe a leaf belt or a brown one

I'll agree with you on the boots, I'd like some suggestions from people on how to improve those, but I'm not going to redo the pants when I like the way they are now, simply because some people don't like cnp...:bgrun:

Im almost thinking sandals if done good would look nice.
or some brown boots with fancy elven designs.

darken around the edges of the vines on his chest :)


Yes i dont care much for C&P but then Im just giving suggestions.

The bottom of the boots look stretched IMO, but the pants do look good, a belt would help, whats the jaina nymph texture?

In the original war 3 plot line, there was some part of the plot where Jaina turned night elf or something, and so there was an NE Jaina skin Blizz made...its in the Beta pack on this site, I think.

Eye problems? dont worry, had them forever :D

http://www.wc3campaigns.com/forums/s...threadid=47225

just use those eyes :foot:

well, the skintone needs to be more brown with more brightness and less pink. Also, when you lighten the skin, remember to burn the dark-perts over again, it looks "plastic" that way.

I really like the hair :foot:

Alright heres my comments:

His face looks like a woman,,,...a homosexual sorry but it does,

I think he needs to have more vines and leaves on his chest also maybe a little bit of leaves or vines on his face? just a suggestion

Besides that it pwns

I don't really see what's wrong with that... Elves are very feminine...

Yes they are, but they still have a male look, i mean god (no offense) look at his face it looks like his lips have makeup and hes about to kiss someone hez a cross dresser! i suggest you redo face to do a more manly elvish nature magic look

I agree witht he last post, his face looks like he took a can of makeup and poured it all over.


Try getting a more realistic face, with more shading on the edges or it'll wrap really weirdly.

hey! the NE jaina in the beta pack wasnt actually by blizzard, the guy who posted the beta pack added that to it ( i saw it in a forum somewhere) and why dont you use CnP'd grunt boots with a few leaves/vines added to them for the boots? they are already natural ( leather) and that would do much better than a sewn leaf sock.

hmm sorry but i think he looks like a gay clown ://// :////