My first decent drawing... [Nudity]

Here's my first decent drawing(weeee), I used the circle method and didnt use any reference pic. I think it has worked well so far. I still have to learn on how to ink it correctly because when I did this one, the lineart was not thin enough and I had to use the erase tool to thin it... The face was too sucky once inked so I had to make in in photoshop by hand(damn long).

I read one of the "How to draw manga (female)" book and realised a lot of porportion issue I had before. I didnt do the background tho(google search...).


NOTE: Yes I know she is naked but umm... I have to practice a bit with nude before trying to had clothes(not that i am complaining;) ).

EDIT: lol im posting this just in time with the new issue of sport illustrated.

Anyway, tell me what I should fix:)

The lineart once fixed in photoshop.

very nice... i like the coloring job. :D


but my crits are that the hair looks funky (the bangs are weird) and her left (our right) arm sort of dissapears....

but i wouldnt recommend trying to draw manga right from the start... the how to draw manga books wont help much in terms of furthering your art skills (except for occasionally copying some anime pics). once you have a good understanding of anatamy and life drawing, more unique styles like manga come much easier. ;)

veary nice....

Umm I ****ked up the hand oh well...

I already draw before, its just that the proportion were too bad.

that's decent... not good...

the left leg looks kinda weird where it connects with the rest of the body. and the head and hair are not that great either...


icbm1987

sorrry to post pics in your thead but try something like one of these p.s. there is 1 thing wrong in both of them lol try and figure it out

and this!!!! if u didnt figure it out the eye in this post and the hair in the first are wahts wrong lol

in reply to buttink:

Hair is odd, eyes are messed up, eyes visible through hair, nose is oddly placed and pointy, mouth looks funny.....

ok basicly hair and eye was what i was looking for but whatever

Sooo why did you post them here?

hes face looks kinda funny thought this might help a little im not saying im awsome but it could help someone.............

When you try to help someone, its more helpful to give an example that is in your opinion "correct" rather than something that has "wrong" pieces

..... i gave 2 so that 1 has shitty hair the other shitty eyes just look off the other one and dont cramp on my style, u help him then ******* dam cant say anything in the forums without being btched out

I put lot of effort in the face expression of my second pic(which I removed because I found too many flaw(sp?)).
the problem is with the face shape, I cant make it look adult, its always too round or too thin...

I wont ink the pic next time and will try to raise resolution instend. I will have some cleanup job to do tho. umm

How do you draw a arm fully extended and facing the "camera"? im having lot of trouble with the perpective and its make the arm look extremly short instend.