Nameless Uncolored

I was aiming for a stylish "future noir" outfit. This is basically a character design, gonna try to put her in pose and situations. I was listening to korean dance music and it was 11pm :/ cleaned and finalized it in the morning.

Here's what I need (real silly): a friggin COOL name... but not à la Matrix-style... i dunt really like does lil codenames... whoever gives a good one gets err... 25points and sniped by loth (copyright Xmetallium)!

So i can add her name at the bottom... if any1 wanna colour it ill be very happy ^^ also C&C wud be appreciated too (command & conquer?)

I'll close this thread when i get what i wnted... if needed :p

No arm on the side pic, lol. The leg are a bit thin, well... at least the upper part of the leg.

yea i didnt draw arm on purpose and hmmm maybe the legs are a bit thin... RATEE!! lol i still need a cool name...

Well I don't know where her hands are... what I think are her hands looks like... well I won't say but they don't look like hands. The arms are too long, legs are short, and the profile picture has a really high forehead, which isn't all that attractive. The guns are also not realistic... they wouldn't function at all. The clip is almost at the end of the barrel, leaving about 3 inches of barrel. On pistols, the clips are usually in the handle of the gun, so as to leave as much barrel as possible for the bullet to gain spin, which makes the gun more accurate.

You really should study anatomy more, and research what you want to draw. She doesn't really look noir-ish (which is I assume a detective right?). The only thing sort of detective is the hat (cute btw. My gf has a french hat but yeah). You should draw a trench coat, wide brimmed hat, the boots, cigarette, etc. As for the anatomy, you don't need to buy anatomy books to study anatomy (as you say that your parents might think its porn). I don't have a single book on anatomy. I learn from observing people and watching how they move. If you work out, you can learn about muscle groups and how they flex when you move. The only muscle lots of anime wannabees (not you. Just more in general) know of is the bicep which they see on DBZ guys. Just keep working and look at people, do more life drawings. Hell stand nekkid in front of your full length mirror and flex and find out where your muscles are.

Lol ill work on that... flex in front of mirror and watchin people til they look at u weirdly :p

i know she doesnt look noirish... maybe sum dark coloring job and an alley background... bleh! now that u jst thought me that about the gunz... i know more.

I'll remake a new pic of here... but im still in search of a name...

Calintz Jerevinian now thats a weird kinda name im lookin for except thats a boy's name.

Caitlin Quinlivan...

just do it you fool... just do it... damned Nike catchphrase...

icbm1987

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cool stuff candy. I can see you improving. I also see alot of hyung tae kim influence.

Beam is right you should learn anatomy first. Learning anatomy is really hard and overwhelming in the begining , but later on it makes drawing so much easier

i agree with all of these guys, on everything (for a change),

i do however, have two more positive things to add:
+ u are definetly improving on the dynamics of your lines, very good, yhis way you'll get there!
+ B, that name pawns...

and shadowblade wtf are you mumbling about!?

thats sooo awesome... so heres the current possible names...

Sira Valenz
Melova Govance
Caitlin Quinlivan

Caitlin soooo cool... i gotta use that... but i dunt like family name

The even cooler thing is that it is the name of one of my friends... heh... I'll send her an email showing her this thread.

Oh yeah... and What's wrong with Quinlivan?

icbm1987

looks like quinvillan?

yea but ur friend will wnt to kill me since i critiqued her name :/

no offence meant..

nah... she's an understanding person...

But I would agree that Quinlivan doesn't sound futuristic enough... as for sounding like Quinvillain... I think I hear a shoe flyin your way erwtie.

icbm1987

the hands are at a wrong place (no I dont mean that u perv) try putting your hands there you'll notice that you cant reach it unless u lower your shoulders, which makes you look awkward.