Cosmus, Bounty Hunter Supreme

Alright, here is my WIP for Cosmus, the main character of TotH, my new campaign. I'm not happy with the armor, but Arthas's chest wraps like a sleeping two-year-old on speed at Christmas, and so all of my attempts at detail on it have come out warped and stretched to hell. So, here is the current version. I may use my blue battlemage after all; they match, and I can cnp my tattoos onto him since they have the same face, making them part of some order.

Oh, I'm gonna add a symbol on his belt buckle (maybe his chest or shoulderpad, too) but I have to make one up first.

Comments and constructive crits, please.

Here he is (all in one pic this time!!!):

Interesting. I think you overdid the filters/brush textures on this guy. A little = nice, a lot = messy.

The tattoo is nicely done, but needs better tones of colour, as it looks flat.

Yeah, I want to redo his chest and legs, but my first four or five tries looked really nice on his left and really crappy on the right. I'm working on it right now, but haven't made much progress. :bgrun:

what´s this with people making stuff that looks completely effect made?

The choice of colors is nice, but the armor is kinda baaad...

The face tattoos are good.

Here's a new chest, all freehand with the help of a little noise. Kinda chainmaily, looks much better. Doesn't look like cracked clay.

Better.

Now just add a small bounty hunter logo on the chest piece and... :ggani:

Yeah, I tried one like the link in my sig, that just looked like a big "X", though. He uses lightning, so I might try for a sword crossed with lightning or something.

Here's a decent looking symbol.

What do you guys think?

Looking good, but the chest itself is still kinda plain.

I second that.

Ok, I'll make a smaller, circular version of the logo and slap it on his chest.

add some abs and some TITAYS!
na, jk...abs...definately for that kinda armor

I'm gonna take one more whack at a breastplate for the ribcage area, with the chain coming out from underneath it. Can't do it till tomorrow cuz I forgot to convert it from a .psd, and I only have access to photoshop at school. But I'm in the computer lab all day tomorrow, so I should be able to finish him up.

how about u add those crossed swords in your sig onto his chest

As I said, I already tried that. It looked like an "X," or it was too big and distracting.