IC: Undead Archmage (Jaina) WIP

Here it is WIP no dirt, blood or anything yet. I need help on what to do with the boots and shoulder pads. I ran out of ideas. I added some red armor which i could add dirt and stuff to but it doesnt fit what should i put?

Any suggestions are welcome make sure they would fit the undead theme.

I know the face sucks on this one. It was hard to make it evil looking. The faces are usally the best part of my undead skin but the i think the torso is the best on this skin.

Its good. Its not your best but its still good. :D

About the evil thing, yeah furion is kinda like that too but a bit easier.

Theres too must dust/ or whatever on her eyes, try removeing some of it, The torso is the best part so far, it looks pretty nice but not as good as your other UD skins

it is wip so u cant judge it to completed or near completed skins

fixed face just some wraping errors it drags her cheeks far.

What about the armor suggestions? or it is ok now.

How about adding some more clothes for her? she'd look alot better

That face is ****ing awesome! I like the patchwork clothing, but her chest/stomach bit has an awkward hole in it.

the stiches give it a abomination effect heh if it had pale skin a mage abomination

Well, right now she kinda looks like a mindless wandering zombie. Make her face have a little personality. I mean honestly who's gonna want to be a mindless zombie girl hero? Make kinda more how should i say it, er... expression on the face. I found that remaking a whole new face is the best way to make it look more evil (it works with furion). Or if you intend to make her look like a mindless zombie i recommend putting some stiches on her instead of putting so many on the armor.

As for the armor, i say you should put some dirt and rips with alphaing in the cape. The shoulders could be used... um... well.... i cant think of any ideas either. Maybe you could put bandages around the boots but that would kinda look dumb. hmm... if i think of anything i'll get back to you.

the lines around her mouth need to be defined a bit less, and maybe done in a smaller brush, but in larger amounts :infth:

u should look at dark ranger for suggestions it looks pretty good

*shakes fist at mock1*

*shake fist at egg for the second time today*

Well maybe the sshoulder pads could be a brown leather with some stiching in them. little dirt a little moss you know old and stuff. Make her look like she just woke up from her icy sleep in a bog on the outskirts of some city.

i agree less stoches on the armorand on the cape if you can change the stiching there to go over the edges aswel right now it looks odd.

I'll do the touch ups to the face. I'm gonna get rid of the strings between the breast and make it a connected top. I think she has a good amount of clothing on. You can see the scars better. I'll do the leather armor also.

Sansui: Yes i can fix it almost everything is in seperate layers. What do you mean go over the edges.


lol first time i got a "****ing awesome" from you.

the stiching ennds at the edge of the cape where the border is but that dosent make sense much. if it was jusr sewed i think some should be on the border and some should stop in the middle random you know.....

Ugh...
Thats friggin disgusting...






Good Job i guess! :D

That looks great Mock :D you seem to have a knack for Forsaken Type characters.