A footman elf skin need some comments plz

hey this is a skin i have been working on and i want some crits and comments8))

OMG LOL... is that my Avenger Weaver in ur avatar crying LOL...

Lol what do u mean by your avenger reaver i got this avatar from a friend ^^

LOL... it looks so MUCH like my Avenger Weaver which is in the DL section if you wanna see... OMG ur friend may have stole it...

come on give me some comments on the skin and how to make it better....

Burn + Dodge it KK... it mostly all you need and if you want touch the sheild up so it less blurry... keep at it :D

ok thx

you have no sense of dodge and burn. solid colors look like shit DODGE AND BURN PLZ

Add some black lines between colors, it looks too cell-shaded.

Burn & Dodge & TRy it on the Bandit model, it is IMO an improved Footman.

well here is an update hope you like it better its still WIP

its still not very good... make it look round on the skin, and make it more defined...

I think you should really fix up the shoulder pads. They look really plain, maybe put some patterns or symbols on it, even changing the color instead of black. Maybe you could make a variation of the skin so it would have more brighter colors. Try making the sword look more metalic, and same for the shield, more silver colors in the sword and shield. The update looks abit better than the first one, but you still need more dodging and burning, more shading aswell. 6/10