Undead KOTG (Furion) WIP

Here is my Undead Furion. The only finished parts (not including blood, dirt, scars, holes, or suggestions) are the beard, face, antlers, spike leaf thingies on the sides of the shoulders, and ears. The rest hasnt been started. However most of the hardest parts are finished. None of it so far is recolor nor CnP. I'll try and keep it that way. Its about 15% done.

Heres what i did with all of them.

Face- Completely redrawn (whole face) but still looks really similar, just looks more undeadish and has wrinkles. It also has the undead skin tone (kinda like Mock1's style).

Beard- Also completely redrawn. More of an old crusty look.

Ears- Redrawn. Same thing as face.

Leaf things- Redrawn just like the rest to look dead.

Antlers- Grr... i hate these. They stretch so far so any blood or dirt effect makes it look horrible :( . I'll probably add moss and shade it better and have more detail. Yes as always they are redrawn.

I will add blood, dirt, scars, holes, or suggestions once i finish it completely.

What do you think? Suggestion? Comments? Concerns? Flames and Spam? (lol jk :ggani:) I will update according to these (except flames and spam. I do realize the screenie isnt that great and its kinda low quality. It shows however all the work I've done so its good enough for now.

need way better shots cant see any details at all. get clear pics

Have you considered alphaing out the antlers? or does that leave a hole there?
At any rate, i don't know what to tell you to make it better, but my comment is that it dosen't look that undead, looks maybe a bit evil, but not very undead. Maybe a lack skin in an area, or just give him some skulls. I just don't know what you should do to make it better. I was really wondering how somebody could make him look undead.

I sorry for the negative post, maybe somebody else will have a more positive outlookemote_confused

Mock1 - I'll just update the skin. Then i'll make a much better pic. But i really dont see very much bad about the pic other than the black background and the kinda bad quality of it. Its not blurry or anything. At least not to me.

Smaug- Don't be sory. That helps alot more than someone saying "AWESOME!". I'll take that into consideration. Yeah i was planning on having skulls or something but its only 15% finished. The problem with making it look more undead is because it basically looks retarded when i add a scar stich or blood to his face (cuz the mirroring, hate it). I'll find a way to work it out.

Well the picture is very blury to me it doesn't look like much was changed and if thats the best you have... (not trying to flame) NO SHINEY GOLD LETTERS FOR YOUUUU!

Most of the skin requests for my campaign from here on out will be based on concept art... they will have to be damn near close to the pictures provided... this is no newby's task, I also need a modeler... wonder if the other guy that posted here is intrested... muhaha.

So if you want to work with us on this project.. show me some of your better work. Or just fix this guy up so he doesn't look like he's in shock from having a **** up his ass... (not flaming just the eyes lol...)

It dont look undead but more of a tree obsessed hippie...

Lord skeith- This isnt one of my better skins now. I've fixed it up though it looks better. Im gonna try and mostly finish it before posting it again. And it's WIP 15% done. Well actually 10%. The pic isnt blurry at all to me. And i dont want gold letters. I wanted pink. And i said i wasnt sure i wanted to. I had no concept for this 100% freehand still. Believe me i can do concept art skins. They are much easier than starting over.

FT- What kinda hippies live around you? Er... it has a blue face. And a yellow/brown beard. Where's the tye dye shirt. Erm... ok i'll work on it. i personnally liked this one (because the portrait, it looked so goofy before).

So anyway, i added blood to the face and some scars (not too much blood) I did half of the cape. :bgrun: Im not gonna post a pic till im completely finished.

Edit:Whoa, creepy. The more i look at it the more it looks bugeyed. *Tears eyes away from screen*. Well, the update wont look like that. It doenst even look like that in the update.

..IT SUCKS! :nono:

The constructive critic part -
Why? Because it's too huge, the beard is way out of size, and the eyes don't just seem right..too much like big yellow circles. And..well, generally, it's corny. Heh. Make a new one from scratch... 1/10.

'sides, Furion whould never surrender to the undead ranks, he'd rather die (ironic, isn't it?)
;)

Shut up, yes he would never surrender but he'd die and the UD still can bring him back to life to serve them, the skin is not that bad, i myself likes it its better then the regular NE furion, alot better