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My very first terrain, Please give comments

02-28-2004, 10:05 PM#1
linkmaster23
Here it is, I got bored today so I decided to take my go at a waterfall. I think it's very bad and needs lots of improvements, I just can't pin-point what and where...







Thanks!
02-28-2004, 10:16 PM#2
sniper1006
Reall good for your first work!!! Good job! keep up the good work!:D :D
02-28-2004, 10:22 PM#3
linkmaster23
Thanks! There still is something...
02-28-2004, 10:28 PM#4
Pesmerga
Very nice work for your first time. Remember, use that Z Fog next time.
02-28-2004, 10:42 PM#5
linkmaster23
New ones with Z-Fog, thanks for the hosting and the idea Persmerga.











Thanks!
02-28-2004, 11:34 PM#6
linkmaster23
I added a river...
02-28-2004, 11:37 PM#7
linkmaster23
:foot:
02-29-2004, 12:25 AM#8
Feko
good....it needed a river...sorta bugs me if there is a waterfall in the middle of no where with out ne sorce of water flow (a river)

good....it needed a river...sorta bugs me if there is a waterfall in the middle of no where with out ne sorce of water flow (a river)

good....it needed a river...sorta bugs me if there is a waterfall in the middle of no where with out ne sorce of water flow (a river)
02-29-2004, 12:27 AM#9
linkmaster23
Last one.
03-03-2004, 04:15 PM#10
KaBoom_336
They're all pretty good :D
03-03-2004, 07:27 PM#11
PheoniX_VII
Looks realy mystic and wet. You could try to lower those waterfalls a bit so they dont flow trough the air like that.
03-05-2004, 12:45 PM#12
Feko
HEY this isnt your first terrain u lier....ive seen a lot of your terrain you crazy person. o_O
03-05-2004, 08:26 PM#13
Murcielago)
very good i like them.. only problem is the water sorta looks like its flying....try making an edge or side keep it up! :D
03-05-2004, 11:20 PM#14
Vilkacis
The water looks like its coming right outta the air...try lowering it, it looks preety good though :D
03-06-2004, 01:09 AM#15
candymuffins
Yeah, it kinda looks like the waterfalls don't have a beginning point, but otherwise, very cool terrain! :D