Melt Their Armor to Their Flesh

Doing an archer/mage/fighter series. The archer is titled Whites of Their Eyes. Here's the mage:

Did you draw the sketch before drawing the thick lines? Because the proportion needs to be better worked on. His arm is a big too small...

Nah, but I placed his neck too far to the left, so it makes his arm look small (going to fix this in photoshop).

looks fine to me, good work hex :D

Due to poor neck placement, I had to overextend the arm for a more natural upper body. Here it is:

I like the names you created. Good job! :D

Its good picture, nicely drawn, but I think the right leg is kind of fat.. And the left leg is too long..

I see no difference in the second picture.

Odd...I extended the arm almost 3/8"...I notice it no problem.