elfcommads firest gallery!

This is my first terrain gallery! i am a noob but i really like making trerrarins. plz dont cus at my work and plz tell me wut i need to work on! and the map started because i just wannaed to have fun, like just do triggers or somthing but i t became a Small map! i used the 32x32 from the umswe and thats one thing it is not that good. it really small. here it is!:D

Pretty nice, but for those walls they are a bit disorganized. Use "shift+click" when placing them, it removes the pathing.

Also try raising/lowering the terrain in some places to get better realism, just a little raise here and there. Try putting mountains in the background too.

ok, but for the moutains i cant! it is the smallest map size and i used up all the space! lol. and the side "hill" i thought shift+click= lowering it. like making a holes. ill try tho! that for looking at it!:D

What Country you from? Anyway you need more mountains around your one, waterfall looks kinda fake, LOTS OF TREES...way lots of trees...Wtf are the walls for? they just look out of place, use the fence instead.

It would look nicer if you made the terrain away from the edge of the map cuz you can see the sky at ground level :\

It looked decent you just have to work on your terrain being more solid and not so edgy (like the water falls and such)

i know i know. i used one on of the smallest size maps and it is really small! i cant do much on it. ill make a bigger size map and make a new one! hope it will look better ;)

Looks good man.
work on with the doodads..

It's good, you just need to make it look a bit more real. The waterfall isn't natural looking and maybe make the middle part of it lower than the sides so it looks like the waterfall eroded the moutain down the middle and so that the water doesn't seem to spill over the sides. Too many of the same trees and maybe change the size of some of them. In real life not all the trees are the same height and color.

waterfall looks unnatural

seems nice enough, although i must agree that it doesnt seem particulary natural

The mountain looks wierd, try smoothing it a bit.
8/10 :D

-Blue

ok ok. i know the waterfall in not natural looking. thanx for the 8/10 blue! im making a new one and ill show u it when im done! thax everyone for wut u said and the ideas and wut i need to work on! thanx!