| 03-02-2004, 07:13 PM | #1 |
im gonna make a RPG i have started a bit with the terrain and come up with a story. Here is the story: year 1750 war had begun.......death......slaguter.... the world was but a shadow of its former self. when the world was about to end the gods aeris and hepestus lended the men a sword. the sword could either be used to restore the world to its orginal or it could be used for Evil and greed. a man called Julius tooked the sword and fled across the sea to unknown continent. from there he would use the sword to rule the world .... A adventerurer who sought for the sword came to the academy in the little town alfrah to train and archive his ultimate goal: to claim the ultimate weapon (the sword) and restore the world to its original. as you can see i have decided to split this rpg into Chapters. the first chapter begins just before the adveturer enters the city.... what do u think of this RPG? comments? ideas? |
| 03-02-2004, 07:59 PM | #2 |
It's a good idea, but you may want to try and put it all on one map. That way you may be able to make it into a multiplayer game :), more fun obviously :P |
| 03-03-2004, 01:01 AM | #3 |
Can anyone say Cliche'? War, Battle, whatever. Go find something to end war, usually some form of a weapon. Blah blah blah... |
| 03-03-2004, 01:48 PM | #4 |
Atleast he's trying to do something Mr. Imabigfatsnobwhothinkseveryoneelsesucks. If you have better ideas that are actually ORIGINAL please tell us. There is little room for expansion on ideas nowadays, since basically everything is a copy of something else. |
| 03-03-2004, 03:31 PM | #5 |
Here is the first screenshot a forest: i want to do a single player map but there might a multiplayer game in later verisions :D |
| 03-03-2004, 03:54 PM | #6 |
Another Snapshot City entrance: |
| 03-03-2004, 07:25 PM | #7 |
Sigh, I was implying that he might need help on a new storyline... These cliche's are getting rather... cliche'd. Anyways, if you need any help with a storyline, you have AIM and PM. Sorry, for any rude people who can't take critism... tassadar920 :< |
| 03-04-2004, 12:21 PM | #8 |
hmm... needs more doodads. but work on. |
| 03-04-2004, 02:08 PM | #9 |
i wont be angry for comments. im just glad to hear what ppl think of my map. and linkmaster if u have some ideas of the story u can write them here in this thread:D |
| 03-04-2004, 06:34 PM | #10 |
The story is pretty good but from looking at the pics I think you need to use more doodads, especially in the forest area. |
| 03-04-2004, 09:30 PM | #11 |
I just am tired of the "Find the item of ultimate power so you can save something" storyline. Just take a few more minutes, and think about a storyline that would really make players want to play it. At its current state, I would at least test it, but not play it in depth. :( |
| 03-05-2004, 11:22 AM | #12 | |
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Anyways, the screens are rather, well, empty? So, more doodads, and get a new storyline PLEASE! And, arnt you that Razor_Spine guy whom made like the owniest icons, without borders? Regards -Blue :\ |
| 03-06-2004, 01:04 PM | #13 |
Okey now for some more constructive criticism: To make the forest look real, add ponds, rivers etc. Maybe cleaings with bushes and flowers and such. And increase the size of the gate in the city so the gate doesnt leave a big hole above itself. -Blue |
| 03-08-2004, 03:31 PM | #14 |
yes i was razor_Spine and i made um........not so very nice icons but i have seen your icons and they dont look so nice either.....im foucusing on sould drain :D .i will fill the map with more doodads and so on when i have time i will lay up the new screenshots here. |