Pretty nice, I got a few chuckles out of them and I like the style. One thing I think you should really work on, though, is the layout of the page. It's hard to know where to read next even though you've put arrows and numbered the balloons and all it was still confusing. One way I do this is by making thumbnails of the whole thing and see how they read. remember that most people (americans and europeans anyway) read left to right, top to bottom so our eyes are going to go to those places first. Keep up the good work. |