After orc Homeworld Destroyed

ok this story is based on after ner'zhul destroyed the orcs homeworld so this story is in the orcs homeworld.. i forgot what its called so anyways heres my story theres an orc warchief named Feral, Feral is against ner'zhul's plan to create like 30 dark portals (if u ever seen the dvd it tells u wc history about that) and you must try and stop ner'zhul but then you fail and your mission is then set on to the regular dark portal that leads into azeroth before your homeworld explodes cause of ner'zhul for creating the dark portals then after you arrive in azeroth you set up an encampment and you soon fight your way through some humans then meet a young warchief named thrall then you help thrall free some of the orcs in the Interment camps then u depart from thrall to go and live somewhere in the deep forests of azeroth... what ya think ??? pretty good story i dont no anyways if any of u make a campaign and looking for a story if u like this one u can take it i dont care anyways
comments welcomed Later:ggani:

Draenor's the place. Sounds all good.

no offence or anything but what clan is this guy from, and your story is completely inconclusive, and you dont have to watch the DVD, and they weren't all dark portals that was just the one into Azeroth, i know i'm just nit picking.

They wouldn't have met thrall for another lets see about 10 years cuz it was a long time since then. Yeah lots of problems with your story. I would start over if i was you or change the story so much that dang it wouldn't be your story anymore except for th ename of this "warchief"

Sides if he opposed Ner'zuhl, the Ner'zuhl woulda killed him. He killed 3 clans before making his other portals ok. One cuz he neaded a skull from the clan leader, two others because they opposed ner'zuhl and he killed a clan leader cuz he wouldn't hand over the death knights with the knowledge on how to create rifts so they would be dead, yeah.

The True Things:ok there were alot of dark portals at the orcs homeworld but right when ner'zhul activated them the whole planet was starting to exsplode? somthing like that and remaining orcs did go to the Dark portal that let into azeroth

The Wrong Things: ok ur right bout the "meeting thrall"

Updated Story

Ok After they escape trough the dark portal the portal exsplodes behind them they then travel through azeroth or whatever and find a place to set up an encampment then they here of Gul'dan and Gul'dan convinces him and his clan to go to his side the warchief then was givin orders by gul'dan to take some of his men and go kill Durotan, they did Durotan was killed as well as his family, Durotans Son (thrall) was left there... in the forest...

Rating and Comments: whatcha think? im not sure if his name was spelt like that Durotan or whatever but anyways Coments Welcomed and you can rate this story on a scale of 1-5 thanks for reading this lol:hm: :guns:

One problem... Gul'dan and Durotan were dead already.

Durotan died during the first war just after warning Orgrim Doomhammer about Gul'dan.

Gul'dan died in the hands of demons when he opened the Tomb of Sargeras. His skull was then taken by Doomhammer and somehow ended up in Draenor, in the hands of a Bonechewer Clan captain. Ner'zhul used the Skull of Gul'dan to reopen the Dark Portal.

If you want some help, I suggest making Feral meeting other renegade orcs, or perhaps Grom Hellscream.