| 03-11-2004, 09:01 PM | #1 |
Im reposting this becuz I want some comments on this pic since I didnt get any at the master contest....... +the fact that Im bored. Done with crappy office pencil (the ones with a little eraser at the top) on some copypaper. The glaive is a bit off but apart from that Im actually a lil' proud with this one *sniff* (...even tho it might look like crap to you) All crits and comments are welcome ^_^ |
| 03-11-2004, 09:04 PM | #2 |
sweet beat sajeebus! the detail on the glaive is incredible, but other than that... i cant tell weather its a girl or boy, the eyes are a bit... blank |
| 03-11-2004, 09:14 PM | #3 |
Its a NE, so the eyes should be glowing and becuz I cant make glow with a pencil, there is no actual glow more than blank eyes. Its a girl, but I was aiming for not making over-sized breasts + the fact that this is my 5th female drawing eva so it might be hard to see... Maybe I did a too good part att the boobie-thingie (maybe I should have turned up the contrast?)... More comments! |
| 03-11-2004, 09:33 PM | #4 |
the contrast is fine. dont change it. i love how detailed you made the armor, its really incredible and the desighn is really good as well. i cant really say anything about it, becouse you would have to tatally change it. this pic is done. i think you shouldnt linger over one single drawing for this long, its time to start some fresh ones. as for comments, i think she is a bit too 'thick' everywhere. NE females tend to be quite long with slender limbs and such, and look really agile, and most of all, attractive. i understand that you wanted to go for a more realistic, more buff kind of women, but i think you kind of overdid it, keep in mind that elves are not humans and tend to have a seemingly unnatural beiuty to them. suugestions for the future: try to make NE woman a little more agile looking. try to work on the hand, wich are the only parts i think arnt really good at all. the rest is fine. allthough i would kinda suggest to give her those long eyebrows, the things you have now look more luike lashes... also you might want to consider making the ears a bit bigger. thats about all i can think of right now... i think you need jac for the real constructive crits. i just want to say again that the amount of detail is simply stunning and that the desighn of the armor is really neat. hmm... i think i made this post a little too long didnt i? ooh wel.... you asked for it ^_^ |
| 03-11-2004, 09:43 PM | #5 |
Yay, comments!!! Btw, what was that "total change" thingie? I NEED TO KNOW!!! I need all the "haunt-your-dreams-for-all-time-crap" now before I move on, since I have barely even started with drawing chars and I might make the same mistake again...(long sentence that) More magi... , I mean comments! |
| 03-12-2004, 03:45 AM | #6 |
It's still a very nice picture man. I just think that she looks a bit bulky... but otherwise it's good. icbm1987 |
| 03-12-2004, 01:00 PM | #7 | |
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like i said, this one is done, make some new art. |
| 03-12-2004, 01:43 PM | #8 | |
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| 03-12-2004, 02:53 PM | #9 |
looks good, but yeah... a bit too thick everywhere, and the lines look a bit faded?/sketchy?/smudged? but the detail is amazing |