| 03-12-2004, 03:03 AM | #1 |
im posting this as a WIP (obviously) and i would like some feedback and get you all's opinion on how i can improve it... im not done shading, but if you have any suggestions on what tools to use (dodge/burn or multiply/screen) i would appreciate the input ^_^ during his childhood, the orcs, still subject to the demonic forces, raided a nightelf 'ruin' capturing one of the dormant nightelf children. having been removed from his place of resting, the young nightelf, only a baby at the time, was brought into the orcish culture, raised in the midst of the greenskins. That Night elf is fully grown now, and he rules over the clan that stole him. Though he is a Night elf by birth, he is an orc at heart. he now lead his clan down a path, away from thrall and the orcs of durotar in order to bring the orcs back to the Demon Lords. |
| 03-12-2004, 03:38 AM | #2 |
AGGHH!! Why didn't you tell me you were this good? that's awesome... the shading is flawless... I like the mask too. whats with the skulls though... I only remember trolls carrying skulls... not orcs. *looks around for X... runs away to find phase cloak* icbm1987 |
| 03-12-2004, 04:10 AM | #3 |
hmmm.. thats good. really good. but one drawback. i think ertw. will bitch about it. bitch bitch bitch like the same way he did to my night elf sniper. no offense ertw. but you do. EDIT: oh yea. add some hair coming aout from the back. make it look more bad ass feral >:D |
| 03-12-2004, 02:27 PM | #4 |
one thing i discovered in doing this pic is that the smudge tool is great when it comes to folds is cloth... that discovery made me happy :> and rem its a WIP, so i want people to give constructive criticism. I wont take it personally, so if ewrt comes around and destroys it with his scathing reviews its all good, i mean thats kinda the point of me posting it :8 and in the skulls well i was thinking of the demonized orcs... they must have had extra pinkskin skulls laying around... right? :\ |
| 03-12-2004, 02:59 PM | #5 |
Lets see... No obvius flaws? Nothing is taken personally, you say? Then Its time to bring forth... Killah critizizer 3.00 - our crits will haunt your dreames for all time 1.blade looks bend 2.skulls shouldn't be hanging that way if the flail hasn't been recently used 3.part of right foot is missing 4.belt looks a lil' flat 5.some of his err... ribmuscles(?) looks a lil' out of place (to me) 6.head seems to be a bit too far to the left (or he's just stretching his neck?) 7.left shoulder looks too big compared to the right one This criticiser is totally based by "bad feelings", sharp eye, jealusy and slight paranoia. Please do not take results personally. ....otherwise, a wip worthy a master! ^_^ |
| 03-12-2004, 03:10 PM | #6 | |
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1. yeah... i know... it started out meant to be bent but then went to a straight blade... ill figure it out 2. who says it hasnt been :> 3. i know, but when i sketched the drawing i ran out of room. will be corrected 4. havent finished shading, i just worked on the folds yesterday, so it will be corrected. 5. i have no idea what you are talking about... take the pic and circle what you mean. 6. i see what you speak of and it was intentional... he is a little hunched in order to make him look more muscley and monsterous. he started out as a pic of an apish monster, but as i continued to draw the outline, the orcish ne was born ^_^ 7. oops! will take care of that |
| 03-12-2004, 03:19 PM | #7 |
it is pretty good, but doesn't look very detailed(you might've meant to do that). the right shoulder looks like it got fondled... |
| 03-12-2004, 03:35 PM | #8 |
fondled?! o_O i have no idea what you mean. And his right or your right? At present i have no idea which shoulder you mean |
| 03-12-2004, 09:00 PM | #9 |
About the ribmuscles(are they really called that?), the reason they look "out of place" to me could be the fact that the left shoulder is larger than the right witch would change the middle-line of the umm... ribmuscles more to the left. Hope you followed me ^_^ ...Look, just cover the sword and look at the ribmuscles and you might see it too. Just put more work into them, okey? (Will he understand what I meant? *takes a quick look at the post* What did I actually MEAN?) |
| 03-13-2004, 01:17 AM | #10 |
i still have no idea what you are talking about... but ill try to figure it out |
| 03-15-2004, 01:34 PM | #11 |
at least he posted a background story to explain... and ui seriously think that the NE would hunt him down and take him with them or kill him but whatever.. you know i love cartoony style... what can i say? it looks good... allthough at first i thought it was a darktroll... but whatever.. if you say its NE its NE... |
| 03-15-2004, 01:47 PM | #12 |
Its wierd that Night-Elf carries skulls.. But its good drawing! |
| 03-16-2004, 03:38 PM | #13 |
come on ppl, ne, but raised by orcs infested with demon energy... of course he is built more orcishly, he has been leading the same kind tough life they led. |
| 03-17-2004, 03:15 AM | #14 |
me want to see blood red hair coming out of the back!!!!! *shakes fist* |
| 03-17-2004, 03:24 AM | #15 |
stop your fist shaking! if you think it will look good that way, ill put red hair coming out the back in a pony tail |