| 03-13-2004, 02:53 AM | #1 |
Ok, I'm trying one more drawing of my char Myrine, who I'm thinking more of NOT skinning lately. This one has, eh, less rips and more hips, a little 'cuter', and a little more action in the pose (kinda jumping to the side). Second attached image is merely an un-pencil colored/unshaded version of the 'final' image, just for ref (tho the unshaded has a little less hair drawn, as it was added it after). Anyway, usual feedback? Psy D |
| 03-13-2004, 03:18 AM | #2 |
It's nice... very. I like her cuteness. and the hips... nice hips... very nice hips. I think the face still looks a bit boyish... the chin looks a bit too square to be a girl's chin. And those weapons don't look very sturdy. The one in her right hand looks like it will flop around like a slinky. the one in her left looks kind of elastic... I don't really know how to fix that though. icbm1987 |
| 03-13-2004, 03:33 AM | #3 |
use less wavy lines in ur weapon to give it a stiff sturdy look, as opposed to this... ~~~~~, it will look like this ~-----~ |
| 03-13-2004, 12:31 PM | #4 |
The right leg is a lil' too long, even for long elves... |
| 03-13-2004, 01:05 PM | #5 |
Mayby. But they look nice and warm.. |
| 03-13-2004, 04:25 PM | #6 |
Hehe, glad to see more constructive criticism lately. I really like Psy's style; it's one of the more distinct styles I've seen on this site. I already gave my feedback on this one, but to contribute to the thread... The style is good, and doesn't need to change at all. If there were anything to improve, though, studying anatomy is always a good thing (and a pretty much constant thing, for me -_-). Otherwise, great, dynamic pose. ^^ |
| 03-13-2004, 11:04 PM | #7 |
I think its really good. Couple of points though: her left leg looks to be in a odd position based on the feel of the motion that i can see... it kinda projects backward while her right leg projects to the left, her butt doesnt quite look right, and the weapons dont quite look battle worthy. But those things are just small little points i noticed, and are overwhelmed by her overall 'cuteness' GJ :D |
| 03-15-2004, 02:35 AM | #8 |
Ok, first off, thanx for the feedback on both this and the previous thread...let's see here... I'm still working on drawing this char properly...this pic here was a bit away from her concept (she's supposed to look ragged and rugged, tho perhaps a little leggy) but, as I said, still a work in progress. Long legs...eh, deliberate (and she's human btw, or is now at least) for design purposes, but yeah, too long in this one. Weapons...I'm probably scrapping them or at least heavily overhauling them for whenever I draw her next. She's supposed to have a slight 'crescent moon' theme which included her 'sword' and 'bladerang'...gotta figure something better than those tho. ;) Butt...teardrop shape, I know...honest mistake. ^^ The pose, well, she's supposed to be lunging/jumping to the right of the page. Her right leg tho seems to suggest otherwise...heh, first person I showed the original linear copy to thought she was jump-kicking to the left. I'll try to rectify the clarity next time. Thanx again so far. :) Psy D |
| 03-15-2004, 04:06 AM | #9 |
Good luck with her! |