Tribal Warrior

My first skin in some time. Any crits/suggestions are welcome.

In the two attachements you see an overall screen and a portait screen.


and heres a picture of the unwrap. Its easier to judge a skin if u can see the unwrap too (in my opnion at least ;))

Looks good. Don't know what race you were going for tho... Im assuming Night Elf, and in that case I'd just use illidan...

Wow.... I mean... wow.... it looks awesome... the face.... so... good ... however... I still have my comments, the weapon's colors go perfectly but it doesnt look like a weapon, you should redo it kinda like evil illidans weapon... color wise i mean.

I wasnt aiming towards making a skin for one of the existing races. ;)

Hmmm, u may be right meesh. Ill try redoing it ;)

Hehe, well I am a genius. ^_^

Edit: Also, the weapon needs to be a bit lower, its too high up for the pendand thing, unless you are trying to make it so it is right in his hand (which you did) and then u should make the pendant be a little smaller but not centered, aimed more towards the top.

Edit2:Oh and the pendant on his chest should be the same as the one on his weapon, personally I like the one on his chest better so...

Edit3 (my personal record!): also, since his feet unwrap like crap in toilet paper, make his legs and feet like his lower arms, it would look pretty cool (but save the first version just incase it doesnt ;) )

Edit4 (I need to stop thinking of more things!): a backshot would be nice too.

Looks good...but i dont like the weapon...otherwise the skin rules.

Umm... It's pretty nice, but his face.. it's kinda wierd, unnatural looking wrinkles and the model messes up his eyes, so they look awkward and crooked.

I'm with Garithos. Fix up that blade and it's golden :D

nice,
take down the bmp/tga picture. some people got sticky fingers, and can steal your work.

very origional awesome work.

move the eyes a little more toward the center and i think u got urself the title of "THE PERSON WHO GAVE THE DH EYES"

No, they get "THE PERSON WHO SUCCESSFULLY GAVE THE DH EYES." Many people have made DHs with beady, lazy, crossed, or friggin huge eyes.

well, its basically the same cause those other dh dont deserve to have eyes

Thats why I hate it when I make really long descriptive posts. Nobody ever reads em... :\

Btw, I really like the necklace, good job.

This Dh skin is sweet. The blades are weird. They dont look very deadly. 9.5/10

btw you should take down the unwarped pic or put some stuff across it because some people "not pointing fingers" might take your skin.