Savage - Comments

A main character for my WoW Guild. Will represent my Night Elf Druid hero. Most likely he wont look like this ingame, but im hoping.

About 30 min with a tablet and photoshop. Will be colored later.

Preview of my WoW Guild Site. http://d2itemcastle.com/Savage

Wow, that's cool. It'd be nice if you'd draw his legs though. Face is kinda off, but no problem, muscles are great.

how is face off? i need it to be perfect

The most noticeable thing is that his left eye is 1) too small, and 2) too far to the right for the way his face is turned. Another thing is his ear is in the wrong place. It should be about halfway on his head. Right now it's too far back and too high. I thought they were horns of some sort at first, but then I looked closer and saw they were ears. That's pretty much it.

Ooohh you forgot horns like Illidan or Furion. He needs some badass horns man :D.

EDIT quick photoshop paintover to help you out. Hope you don't mind. Basically when drawing the head, divide it into quarters, and then the front one is the center line (which I'm sure you know of) and the line on the side is the halfway point on the head, which is where the ears should go. Oh and I also drew in where the eye should go.

Okay to tell you about his face, its way too thin for a savage, he needs a mean rough look with visible jaw muscles. I think you should do two or three of them untill you get the best looking one for you. It can't hurt to try. The muscle detail is great, but the muscle is a little shaky. Try to get the main curves a little straighter, but thats only on the arms. Good job on everything though, it gives off a savage look.

Oo thanks beam... thats very helpful... after im done with Chappelles show, ill redo it. And lunatic, I made muscles shaky on purpose. And I dont really think NEs have big strong faces...

Ummmm... I'm watching new Chapelles show too, pretty funny Oprah. Anyway, the keeper of the grove, the... infact I shouldn't go on, Samwise made them, they ALL have very strong facial features.

Nice job MoOp. I would agree with what beam said... the whole eye thingy.

I like the muscles... they are pretty damn awesome. The ears should be longer as well... elves have long ears... very long.

icbm1987

meh... what beam said on the eyes... they are misplaced. plus i think the ears are WAY off... they seem too bent and stuff, more like orc ears, make am bigger and more stretched. like in the references that where posted before.

I think that eyes are allright.

Muscles look strange, but still they are cool...they are "wavy"...i dont know better word for that.

sorry to say it but if you think that i would advice you to seriously revise your knowledge of the human body... the eyes are VERY misplaced.. as a mattter of fact, imo, that and the wrong ears totally destroy what actually is a very good pic.

well, i like it (though i agree with the comments of the other ppl).

only crit is that the top set of abs looks a little slapped on, as in they dont look that much like muscles, but more like some sort of armor plating

thanks for crits guys... the ears at first werent supposed to be NE, just didnt change... will get to all you guys said once im not sick... * at home coughing *

i luv ur muscle drawing style that hand is very well done too

nice work

Update... crits