Female Elf Brute Concept Art

here is a "Brute" concept drawing i did of a elf female.

it was done in photoshop 7.01 100% free hand.

the concept art will help me make the model for her.

Crits? comments post em here.

i will post new angles with her weapon asap.

Hmm, she looks a bit manly, and not just because she's ripped. Shouldn't she still have some indication of hips, even with the bulging masses all around? Also, I think her crotch should be a bit wider, but the legs coming more towards the middle just below the crotch. Also, the lighting is pretty disinteresting, but I'm guessing that's because you needed it to be directly from the front so you could mirror image.

Also, the torso/arms seem a touch short compared to the legs, and the calves seem short compared to the thighs (I suggest shortening the thighs to fix that).

Sorry I don't think you should be saying that considering you are very defensive when people say you draw womenly men, this is just the opposite.

No, actually, it's not... it's a matter of anatomy. I said, taking into account that she's extremely muscular, I think her hips might need to be wider. It's called a suggestion/crit - which Hybrid pointedly requested. If I were to sit here and harp on how manly the Elven woman looked post after post without giving specifics, then that would be the same thing.

Very muscular indeed, that lady is a walking musclesack! But its good drawing :D ! It made me want to listen the machoman song!

You still said she looks manly. Aside from that, I think it's a bit hypocritical.

There is a huge difference between what she said, and what people say about her men she draws. Her men she draws still have the basic build of a man (broader sholders than hips), females have a basic skeletal build as well, hips about as wide as sholders. WOmen have an hourglass shape, men have more of a tapering shape... I think the crit Jac gave you is good, because its what I thought when I first saw the picture. The groin needs to be a little wider, even thongs are wide somewhat, it still has to cover that area, one that size would well... give her a weggie

is that a skin for a model? the eyes kinda look like it. it is right?

i have a question, the shading and color is pretty good, but are there muscles on that elf that dont exist in real life? her arms look strange, i think that you should maybe do a google search for women bodybuilders and base the picture off that.

i like the pic, but i think that you dont have a great idea of how the muscles would build if a woman gained a ton of muscle mass, you just kinda made her thicker. this isnt trying to be evil, just give suggestions.

reguardless, gj :D

That works for a skin, but not for a concept art.

WOO HOO im not alone in my opinion!

Thats what I first thought when I saw it.

actually its a concept for the skin for the model i am doing.

jacinthe thanks for your suggestions i'll do what you have pointed out.

and thanks all.

it was my first freehand photoshop drawing so thats why its a bit dodgey (lol)

heres the back any suggestions what could be done?

OMG the woman...

dude wtf's with the crotch.
have you ever watched world's strongest women show? or something like that$$$ the womens with big muscles, do not have breasts, breasts is fat, and they dont have fat, they're filled with muscle, and i seriously dont know why the hell are you making an ogre-elve , its just terrific, when i first saw your concept i gasped-laughed. it's good anyway for a freehand, and if it's supposed to make you help do a model, i understand the twisted butterfly face. but if she got mad muscles, it's gonna be hard for her to have all her remaining fats only in her breasts. keep up the "good" work, but respect the laws that have been applied to our bodies.
And i will say it again; dude wtf's with the crotch. make her wear pants in battle a grunt might accidently remove her thong and see a big muscle. it's just my opinion, but lol a thong ^_^

I think its a wip for a skin though. That means she won't be fat on a model... I think