Wip Drawing need suggestions plz

ok so i need suggestion on that wip drawing comments welcome, i want a fight scene wit background but have no idea of which opponent to do if anyone could say suggestion it would be appreciate thx o yea ans sorrry maybe thats a bit big size but i just scanned 2 sec ago

... You should draw the body under the clothing before you add the clothing itself. The fact that I am seeing none of his torso... not even the back of the shoulder where it connects to his back, disturbs me.

And something I found to work really well, at least if you can see easily (I'm a 20/20 so I'm fine).

1) Do your prelim sketch in a pencil with grade about 4H... and then go over the details you want to keep with your regular 2B... it makes scans alot more clean... trust me. I got 4H lead for my .5mm pencil at LEWIS... but you can probably find them other places too.

icbm1987

pretty good, right hand looks a little small, but overall... good

well nice advice icbm, i guess ill need to buy some more special pencils actually i only got mechanical one and for the torso im just trying to know how i could put it into its a part of the work to do thats kinda one of my first serious work and im taking my time to do it.

Thx guys this have been helpful any advice or critics watever are welcome ;)

my friend Jennifer has 20/15 vision so hah!

i think the sword needs some work, im sure if you gave it some more attention it would look alot better. A background or scene is definitely missing here, its hard to suggest an opponent for this guy since it doesnt seem likes hes from the warcraft world, looks like you've drawn a monk here so i guess his opponent could be a ninja or something maybe flying down in front of him with a sword

first he's holding a knife, not a sword.
i suggest you to draw a crpy lord or a granite golem, or a cat or a ninja. but i suggest you a crpy lord, why would a ninja would attack a peasant with a small left arm holding a dagger, it's just not realistic. put a ogre with a opened stomach, or a monster, or a centaur, or thrall or a marine. yeah i suggest you a crpy lord. ( crypt lord )

i dont think knives comes that big, looks like a sword to me seeing as its got a proper guard/tsuba which a knife wont have. and a ninja would be realistic, hes drawn a monk - since when you see one of these guys in warcraft, a ninja would easily attack a monk for an assination job or a robbery, this is far more believable. What dont make sense is a crypt lord, why the **** would a monk go up against crypt lord, why would a crypt lord even bother

whole picture --> its aint for warcraft but its still a concept art
sword --> its a wakisashi which is like a small sword between katana and knife
the right arm --> the right arm is smaller cause its in front of him, the left arm is pointing left

Still need a torso and a background as well as an opponent and its not a monk its just like a asian wizard-fighter of some kind, monk use fists or quarterstaff or stick and yes the sword was made in like 20 sec.

Well you know, lizardfolk are always in fashion . . .

i presumed monk since alot of the characteristics point to a monk, the hat, bold looking head with a single plat, and monks do use swords. dunno if this helps but you might wanna try him out on bridge or something to that area, heres a quick idea:

the first time i saw your drawing i instinctivly thinked he was holding some herb, but then i realized it was fire. also for the oppenent, i resay my main idea, a crypt lord, it would holds many good points.
1. It is very original, and it might be a fierce battle.
2. Crypt lords wanders a lot, monks too.
3. They look like cool, and its a sign of respect towards wc3.
I hope you will draw a crypt lord and not a ninja , everyone draws people kung-fuing ninjas, the ninjas pops up nowhere and they jump on trees. crypt lords don't , they're pure originality, please, dont ruin your dessin, draw a crypt lord!
Just look at it, it would rock so much!

thats some kickass ideas i think ill have to work on photoshop, the sheet is too small, ill try to design a badass monster with the background of mystical ive never tough about that actually ill design the monster on another sheet and join both of ems with the background, with a little colorization as well that would be cool.

oh and yea tell me wat u think about that its a logo for a friend band

that's a wise choice, drawing a monster can be creative but unrealistic. anyway you shouldnt care about the realism since your monk is holding flaming herbs.
about your logo i think it looks like a flaming ancient, globably, it looks good, only the flames seems blurred, other than that i see no flaws. blurring isnt that dramatic, the concept is good