Elven Paladin - WIP

Here is something i drew a while ago... (my scanner was cheap, 100 USBucks, it sucks...)
comments or questions?

Are you sure it's a paladin? It seems a little lightly armored, and hardly devotd to any cause worth talking about.

Maybe a skirmisher?

[edit]: It does have the Good Book, though, I'll give it that.

Yeah, he is a bit on the scrawny side for a paladin, check out my pally Hale!

female battlemagi paladin thing.... u get the picture...

You should find a way to distinguish males and females apart in your art.

>>well lets see

1. scrawny like u said
2. breasts
3. hairstyle(some are males but hey), earrings (not the type males wear (unless homosexual (but im not gonna draw any thing like that)))

Well I'd say put some hips on her, and not all women are scrawny, and not all men are buff.

LOL I cant tell its a female. practice more

me neither she doesnt seem to have breast maybe the earing give ous a clue

hrm....
1. if it is a female, then give her a more curvy figure. i.e. bigger breasts, and an actual ass. that pally u drew has to body of a prepubescent boy.
2. the sword is akwardly placed. the hand is gripping it like a daggar, and it is going behind his body.
3. glasses on a pally??? a battlemage pally??? oh well.. whatever rubs your buddha...
4. ur style of drawing is very anime-ish.. and most anime char. tend to have the same unisexual facial features. but even so, if it is a female, try to show it more in the eyes.

Give her some eyelashes too. Longer ones, helps in distinction in anime.

what everyone else said, also i think she needs a better expression on her face, right now she looks bored

You should really throw that scanner in nuclear waste and shit on it ... Do they even sell that kind of shit ? :o

Cant say much about the picture because your scanner sucks so much.

wish i could, only scanner i gots, and its doin pretty well... ill buy a new one next year or christmas..

curvy, definately more curvy, even flat chested warrior women have SOME curves. some of the detail work is good though