Battle

I work on this at school after I am asked to stop talking in some of my bs classes... (all 4 of them)

Its still a work in progress. It's 166 frames at this point. You can post ideas for me if you want but these are the only 2 characters that will be in it.

TAHTS FRICKEN SWEEEETTTTTTT wtf did u do it with???

its a little messy at some points, but nevertheless is kicks ass. that mech thing is awesome. :D

Totally awesome man!

image ready.

first I drew each image on a sheet of paper. Since I was at school the first 90 had lines on them... and erasing all those lines from all 90 frames wasnt fun :(

nice choreochaphy.... <-(how the fuuck do you spell that???)

BUT, it really is a bit messy at some points...

true, its good, but the messyness makes it difficult to follow at points

still :D

any specific parts i should work on?

any specific parts i should work on?

added alot more frames now. There were 166 now there are 230. I'm not sure about the timing for all the new ones... some seems kinda weird... I dont know.

That was really good.
The part after they parashoot is kinda of confusing but the rest is great.

i like the matrix shooting scene.

i really like how your 'cam' isnt just in one place but is dynamic and always moving, spinning around and such...

cant wait to see a cool lightsaber battle!!

YEAH BABY!!
*makes lightsaber sounds*
*breaths heavely*
luke.... i am.... your.. father...

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

*hand is cut off*

*falls off and lands on the convieniantly place Millenium Falcon*

I agree, matrix frame is good (is that text gonna be in the final version?)

should i keep the text?

Added a few more frames... i'll probably add more in business class tonight.

I'd say to get rid of the text in the end portion, it breaks up the action.