Demon Snake

Just something I drew in class instead of watching a video; a friend scanned it for me so I decided to post it.

thats awsome! i wouldnt say anything to fix

i find it hard to do jaws that are open... but thats just me.. good job!

Actually, there are a lot of things that can be fixed, but I rarely go back to pics that I draw for fun.
Thanks for the comment though.

well to me, seems like nothing to fix, but whats to fix is only based on opinion

but ur welcome

wow thats impressive, thats some pro style sketch art, all i can see that u could fix is maybe the fingers, they doesnt look much like fingers

Muscle anatomy looks a little off, other than that, not bad

It's about time I give some constructive criticism around here. Okay there ARE flaws, so I'll point them out. (Jac or Kimchi can probably find more)

its a pretty nice piece, but i wouldnt call it awsum leet stuff yet...
nuf to be fixed.

the idea is kinda nice though.

Moon Lunatic:
Thanks for the crits. The tail problem I've noticed since the time it was drawn, and the lack of a light source is a consistent issue in most of my casual sketches. I get what you're saying is wrong with the horn, but I'm not too concerned about the fingers because I'm already aware of the number of joints there usually are, but it's not necessary to adhere to it if I'm going for a fantasy creation.

erwtenpeller:
Definitely not 'awsum leet'. Care to elaborate on what needs to be fixed?

This was really just a very casual drawing, but even in more serious pieces I know I have to work on anatomy and proportions. Anyone know a good site to help me?

You like your wacom don't u moon lunatic. I don't think anything needs to be fixed, when it comes down to it, it's a creation and dosn't have to adhere to human anatomy laws, or event he laws of physics.

Yeah, Wacoms rule.