u do have some sense of color.. meaning u know where shading should go. so thats not too bad, but like the people above said, the face is weird, unless u wanted the guy to have a deformed face. If so, then u coulda made him more disfigured.
HIS right eye should be smaller to give a sense of perspective. and it woulda have hurt to pertrude his nose out more. it woulda given more depth to the face. also, the shape of the overall face is in a kind of upside down tear drop. most men have an actual jawline, meaning that their face wont look that like. some women would tho.
there is also the face that the hair looks rather weird. its a..... ehhhh...... its just weird. he has a long-haired-comb-over to one side of the face, yet on the other side, he doesnt have much hair at all. bald spot maybe????
well.. i gave my criticism.. and just continue to draw and post here. the more u draw, the more u improve. ^_^ | 
