What do you think of this voice acting?

It is my first try for an orc actually so, don't expect too much :) I just wanted to know what people here thought of it :)

Tips:

-Don't just speak, ACT! It's not deep or harsh enough to sound like an orc. Other than that, it's not too bad recording - I've certainly heard worse.
-There's some background distortion there (Every home-PC mic picks it up though, don't worry). Check out my tutorials at SAVAGE (The articles>basic and advanced editing ones are what you want). http://savage.samods.org/
The downloads (pictures and sounds) will be down due to our server moving, so use it as good as you can for the time being.

Thanks for the tips Magic, but after all, this was my first try. And it also has been some time ago I did it. :) But hey, I just wanted to give it a try :)