| 04-12-2004, 07:41 PM | #1 |
Some human I drew a while ago, gonna color it later. Critics are welcome, because I need lots of improvement. |
| 04-12-2004, 08:17 PM | #2 |
Not being the master artist, all I can say is that one of your eyes is off - either move the right one (his right) closer in, or the left one farther out. |
| 04-12-2004, 08:31 PM | #3 | |
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what he said... as well as he should have some cheekbones... and The collar closer to us needs to be a bit higher. other than that... good work. icbm1987 |
| 04-12-2004, 10:28 PM | #4 |
Fix the eyes they too close (move the left one further outside) his ear is meh... and make him larger his shoulders broader... he looks compacted right now. There's another "anomalie" that I dunt know how to explain. |
| 04-12-2004, 11:08 PM | #5 |
Do what the others said and make his forehead smaller by moving the eyes up his head. |
| 04-13-2004, 07:09 AM | #6 |
Hmm thanks for the advice, however I should have read it before I colored it, that means I allready colored it without making any changes :\ . Anyway I have been looking at the eyes for some while and haven't found the problem yet, perhaps you could try and fix my drawing ^_^ . Anyway here is the colored version... |
| 04-13-2004, 03:23 PM | #7 |
i see anothing thing wrong, the shoulders. the one on the left looks smaller than the other when that one is supposed to look bigger than the other. |
| 04-13-2004, 07:34 PM | #8 |
his left shoulder (his right our left) looks a wee bit flat IMO. otherwise, pretty dang good |