Please rate my work

Well if its bad its cause its my first REAL terrain. Please give tips on how it can be improved. Ill make a new map (prolly a water scene) as soon as I think this scene is complete (well as complete as I can get it), so...heres the screeny! ^_^

EDIT: Version 2s up and ready to go! Fixed the floating tree, removed the wierd shrubs at the door, added some (ok, Heaps) Shrups in the tree area and took the screenshot from far back so you can see more

The plants in front of the house should be moved and darkened. I don't think a house will ever have any plants right in front of the door. Also, the tree nearest the house is floating, use Pg-Down to lower it below the ground so you cant see its ugly bottom.

What he said.

i like the sunset, if im right, is a custom skin right?

I like that sky :D . i sugest making those trees quite a bit bigger and having them go further back, you can see too much sky through the trees. then add some environmantal doodads where the forest meets the path, rocks bushes shrubs cattils kind of thing. you could try making those hills on either side of the path bigger. but most importantly, these no fog. you might also wasnt to add some variation to the path tiles

Ok ill do that tomorrow (or today If 12:12pm is today if ya no whot i mean) the skys off orc backdrop thing V0 or whatever they are called, i didnt notis tha tree. ty for commets

Ps if i have bad spellin its cause im half assleep

EDIT: i know edits a bit sudden but with the 2nd post )i cant remember who it waz( i was trying to hide the bottom of the house with the shrubs, if u no a betta way tell mp pleaze

I love the sky :) Also, there's a good thing that you used different type trees, it comes not so monotonic.

{What Special Effect did you use to create the sunset, btw?}

I've explained the sky stuff before. Like in my mansion thread:


There you go... again ^_^

To tell you the truth I learnt that of you, small chattroom isnt it ^_^

Glitch: I want the sky to be the focus of the entire scene so thats why i left the trees so small. If i add fog all the people turn the colour i choose (Custom Dark red) So thats why i dont use fog, please help me on that one :( oh and im adding enviromential doodads right now ;)

[DEATH]: I really want to hide the ugly bottom of the house so thats why I put shrubs there, if you know a better way of hiding the bottom of stuff, please tell me (And dont say put some pants on it ^_^) and also you said press Pgdn but you hold Control and press PgDn on my keybord :>

Oops, forgot to add Crtl+Pg-Down not just Pg-Down. Oh well.
And what do you mean by ugly bottom? Is it floating or something? Or just ugly?

Forgot to add comments in this whole thread o_O.

Anyway, good terrain, could have some improvements, still good terrain!

great terrain... (^_^) (-_-)

To [death] in one word, its ugly, well, 2 words ^_^

White fog. i think it looks best in what i call autumn terrain. i tried using orange for fog for that kind of terrain once, but it didnt look good, too orcish. but you may be right, any fog may ruin the effect of the sky unfortunately

as stated before, add some variation to the path tiles. make some rough dirt in certain spots along the path like where the road is starting to wear down. or put some grassy dirt on the side of the road. when i get back from work ill post a pic and show you what i mean. oh yea and add more than one screen. you dont have to do more terrain just yet but snap shots of different angles. all and all it looks great and in my opinion shows alot of promise.

I actually ran out of terrain space, you know...that number where it has to be below 12 and terrain is 2 or something :\ im confusing arnt i lol