| 04-28-2004, 10:01 PM | #1 |
This is a little ogre monk concept i worked on for about a half-hour in like 10 minute intervals over a span of 3 days. Done about 2 weeks ago. C&C very welcome, as i'm sure there's a lot to be fixed. |
| 04-28-2004, 10:17 PM | #2 |
I quite like the face and the gloves, but it needs more work. If it's an ogre, then it should be much fatter, and more muscled, but not too muscled, seeing how he's a monk. He would also need two heads, unless he is a stonemaul ogre. I do have a problem with the face, however. It looks too... contemplative. He looks too smart for an ogre. Granted, that again he is a monk and would have to be pretty smart to become one, but he looks smart smart, if you know what I mean. You'd expect him to have a british accent and wonder 'what the devil you want.' Oh, and GIVE HIM FEET! Why is everyone too lazy to give their characters legs? Do you expect them to crawl everywhere? |
| 04-29-2004, 10:46 AM | #3 |
It looks kind of flat :P And as Khadhar'phak it needs more muscles. But I dont know about that "too smart thing".. He looks pretty stupid to me. |
| 04-29-2004, 11:48 AM | #4 |
... Okay... he is NOT too smart... that expression looks like my friend when he zones out in AP chemistry. And he doesn't need more muscles... they just need to be more defined... most likely he will end up being the only ogre without a potbelly. icbm1987 |
| 04-29-2004, 04:11 PM | #5 |
Have you never seen someone thinking hard about something? He really looks like he's concentrating on something... or it could just be gas. |
| 04-29-2004, 08:29 PM | #6 |
Thanks for the suggestions. Might make the changes if i ever get around to it. If anyone else has any other comments to add they'd be very appreciated. |
| 04-29-2004, 08:59 PM | #7 |
Ogre??!! It looks too skinny and too kind. Make him fat and evil!! |
| 04-30-2004, 03:12 AM | #8 |
uhhh.. i think it lacks detail. it looks to plain. especially for an orge, ogre, how do you saw it? etc. etc. etc. |
