| 04-30-2004, 06:33 PM | #1 |
This Young High Elf Was Found In A Forest By Some Orcs She Was Raised As An Orc Girl. But One Day The Orc Village Was Attacked By The Scourge And The Girl Was Killed But She Was Raised As A Dark Ranger And now Serves As One Of The Generals Of The Scourge. So Tell Me What You Think about This History.^_^ |
| 04-30-2004, 06:50 PM | #2 |
I find the whole little girl who gets wacked by the undead, then becomes a general of their army rather unbelievable. And why did you capitalize all the words except for a few random ones. |
| 04-30-2004, 06:54 PM | #3 | |
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Question Number One This Is Many Years After The Girl Was Founded And She Is Adult Now Question Number Two It Was Just A Mistake :> |
| 04-30-2004, 08:04 PM | #4 |
Does Anyone Have A Better History So Come With It |
| 04-30-2004, 08:28 PM | #5 | |
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This seems a little light to really base anything off of if your going to make a cenimatic or campaign, and anyway, what orc would raise an elf, and as said before why would the undead kill her then have her become a general, unless your thinking of the WC3 undead campaign when sylvanas was turnned into a banshee. I don't think undead would want just some elf as a general, she needs a bigger background and be special. You need to add alot to it if its going to get anywhere. |
| 04-30-2004, 09:03 PM | #6 |
The elf girl was obviously the bearer of some greater power, which meant she had a special place in the undead army once they turned her. The same power could have prevented the Orcs from killing her. And stop capitalizing everything, it ****s up the wordshapes and makes it harder to read your posts. |
| 05-01-2004, 06:57 AM | #7 | |
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| 05-01-2004, 08:30 AM | #8 |
Heres some picks of the elf girl in her undead form And does someone have a good name for her |
| 05-01-2004, 10:36 AM | #9 |
Somebody have a good name for her if so post it here;) |
| 05-01-2004, 02:50 PM | #10 |
Marrim. I assume as the story progresses she learns of her origins and turns back to oppose the undead? |
| 05-01-2004, 06:43 PM | #11 | |
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Maybe you can be the story writer of the campaign? when i start on it but first i have to finish my map. But Find Another Name On The Elf Girl |
| 05-01-2004, 08:11 PM | #12 |
Her Is She In Her Living Form^_^ |
| 05-02-2004, 04:02 AM | #13 |
Name: Amara Crystaldark Story: Once every 1000 years a high elf is born with great dark power and evil impulses. In her home village, small children would periodically go missing. They were being ritually sacrificed in the woods by Amara. This went on for several years until the village elders realized that Amara was the person doing it. Their origional plan was to kill her, but they found that they were too good and civilized to kill one of their own kind, even if Amara was irrediemably evil. As a compromize, they left her deep in the dark forestland to live out her life in isolation. She did for several years, becoming a savage creature, but still retaining her elven intelligence, until she was found by a band of dark orcs who had split from the Shadow Moon clan. The band's shaman saw the girl's power and took her in, teaching her to control her brutal, animalistic darkness and use it, turning Amara into a cold, calculating and utterly malevolent killer. Then the Burning Legion attacked, killing everyone in her clan. The dreadlord in command of the attack-force noticed her ability to create and manipulate dark energy, and had her spared (although it is questionable as to whether she would be killable had he not). She was sent to the lower planes to hone her abilities and returned some time later to serve as a powerful agent of the Legion. She stood in this role well, using her powers to kill and maim, until she was murder in her sleep by servants of Arthas during his dissent from the Legion. Kel'Thuzad too saw the power of her life-force and had her raised as a Dark Harbringer, and she now serves the Scourge, using a combination of her vile powers and her bow to bring ruin to living. Good enough for you? |
| 05-02-2004, 07:13 AM | #14 |
Yes that was the best story and name for the elf girl i have seen in this thread:D And if you want you get the jobb as story writer in my campaign |
| 05-02-2004, 07:31 AM | #15 |
And one thing i need a title for her in her living form And about the story do you think this will be before or in the campaign |
