It seems plain. The helm doesn't blend at all. I idea is okay the spellbreaker is over used with the black face. It needs more detail and it will be good.
I dont usually do black faces, but the revenant doesnt have a face so I just did that. I dont see whats wrong with the helm, could you guys be a little more descriptive? And its not only CnP, just parts of the shield and the dress thingy.