| 05-19-2004, 10:18 PM | #1 |
Probably my first WC art submission (drew it in pencil, blended w/ a smudged finger). Flames? Comments? Anything? |
| 05-19-2004, 11:04 PM | #2 |
doenst look bad at all :D the only thing is that she is so skinny its scary (up of the hips) |
| 05-19-2004, 11:06 PM | #3 |
Look Perfect, 9.5/10 |
| 05-19-2004, 11:09 PM | #4 |
something seems to be missing in the face. |
| 05-20-2004, 05:32 AM | #5 |
ill actually give you crit.. lol the proportions are off... the legs and hips are fine.. is her abdomin, breasts, and arms that are the problem. while it is nice to draw women w/ an hourglass figure.. you over exagerated it. as for the boob.. they tend to point inward.. which is awkward. if anything, they should point outward. the arms are a bit misplaced... if you can see, at the top outsides of the breast.. you drew a line connecting the shoulder to the breast. while a normal breast does do that, it shouldnt be viewed like that.. especially in the totally front position that you drew her in. her breast should be more on the outside and the shoulders should start a little behind her breast. the way you drew her makes it seem like she has very broad shoulders. but it is decently covered up by your cape. other than those things... keep drawing.. you'll keep on getting better d^_^b |
| 05-20-2004, 06:45 AM | #6 |
It's ok... but I would agree with FUNG on this one... and another thing... Her cape doesn't seem to 'flow' like it should... it looks like one solid piece because it lacks folds and isn't deformed by gravity... the top part may be armor... but the rest should be cloth. And the weapon seems to be too small... and the hands need work... Just keep drawing and you'll get better. icbm1987 |
| 05-20-2004, 06:54 AM | #7 |
The fingers look VERY thin to me. :\ |
| 05-20-2004, 08:49 AM | #8 |
Nice one Lord...your Drawing looks very promising, take FUNG´s and ICBM´s comments as construtive criticisms(which they are)...and they have the reason, in fact take those comments, make a draw based on them, then try another draw, this time trying to look at the draw not as the man who drawed it, try to put the thing you just drawed side-by-side with the draw and see if it have at least barely the same shape...You have a very good trace, have a good notion of shadows, but, anatomy take a little time to learn...i´m sure you´ll be very good, other than that, i liked you trace and shadows. |