| 05-22-2004, 09:24 PM | #1 |
This is my first Pen to Photoshop Style Piece, let me know what you think, what i did well, what i should've, and what can i do to be better at this. Constructive Critisism welcome. Last ones the final one =) |
| 05-22-2004, 09:30 PM | #2 |
Hah. Really like your style. Looks good. No crits from me, sorry. |
| 05-22-2004, 09:52 PM | #3 |
For a funny cartoon style drawing that is awesome! The coloring isn't shabby too fix the hand holding the axe though, his thumb must be on the handle and not besides it. And the pre final phase, the axe had a nice shine on it which i liked, don't throw it away by covering it with blood but if you want well less blood so we can see the shine ^^b. I can't say nething wrong on anatomy since its cartoon disproportioned on purpose but I'll give a few suggestions on da orc fella... Maybe add sum beard or chest hair since orcs are hairy lol. Make his teeth dirtier add sum darker colour than the one u used and color the top of his teeth as if they were rusted... Shade more the shadows are almost not visible. And yea i know you started from a sketch but you should try to get a more dynamic outline or thicker lines at some part to give a more professional and cartooney style. Well that's all i can say... Erwt will tell you the rest, his drawing style is cartooney, you can learn alot from him. Also, in ur sig (nice too) says... animator... can you animate and skin?? If you would like to join my mod you'd be a welcome addition. Since we need a skinner and animator (mostly animator) if you join you won't get much to do yet since our models are in skinnin process. |
| 05-22-2004, 10:12 PM | #4 |
Thanks for your comments like i said before, this is my first i was doodlin a lot last night and dunno what came over me i scanned it in this morning, that tooke me like 1/2 hour, i remembered some photoshop coloring tut i read way back =) thanks a lot for your suggestions CW and i hate u cuz ur mod has its own forum... jk thx for you offer but as you can tell by my Sig im tring to run my own mod, but we can talk about labor trade =D |
