Transformer druid

I did this very quick so it looks real sloppy and I'll straighten the lines out as soon as I can. but if anyone can give me a clue to how to make it look more like a transformer do so, I haven't seen the cartoon in about 8 years. I still have to do the bear so it 'll actually transform into a robot bear.

try to work some more on it... it looks too flat

first finish it some more, burn dodge blabla etc, and then we'll see if it still doesnt look like a robot.

from what i can get from the 'big lines' ur heading in the right direction... i think.

but i never did any transformer stuff or somthing...

and you shopuld skin the bear too (duh)

Actually this one is going in the fridge I'm already bored with it, I might do a monkey grom next, but I can't decide: gorrila, chimp or baboon.

It's good practice to finish a skin or anything you're doing before moving on. It develops good habits. In some cases this rule can be waived; but you'll progress slowly if at all if you don't start finishing skins. That Ydoh guy had a habit of that IIRC.

yes I know ussually I 'm very perseviring( is that a word) but I just lst all interest in it for now, but I'm sure I'll finish it properly soon, I just have too many things on my mind right now to go all out Transformers, but still all comments and crits are welcome and I will keep them in mind for sure.

WOW love that face. A littl flat tho. Work on your shading. Look for tuts on "Photoshop Techniques" or "Photoshop shading" on google.

if ur doing a monkey gerom... i guess baboon would be the one to go for becouse of the face shape and the tusks.