| 06-13-2004, 08:29 AM | #1 |
Heres my doodle, best i can do for now (4:30 am... at shadow's house) crit/comments |
| 06-13-2004, 08:34 AM | #2 |
like ive told you, you should fix the body a bit, its too long the belt isnt centered and the hand needs a bit correcting, not that i was any better at doin it... (hes at me house, so i dunno why i posted this(post count?(nah))) |
| 06-14-2004, 02:49 PM | #3 |
A minor note on the hands - remember that the palm is not a completely flat area like you ake it seem on the left hand of your drawing. Lacking proper anatomical terms, I'll simply ask you to remember the free-hinging joint that allows your thumb to rotate in front of your other fingers, and to point out that your hands tend to be curved. I'd provide a visible demonstration, but I don't have a scanner at mh beck-and-call. Could someone help out? |
| 06-18-2004, 02:25 AM | #4 |
ty for ur honest opinion...i know...i need to work on the hands,i am gettting lazy again so dont expect me to be doin more than abstract doodles.which i obviosly am not gonna post i dunno maybe ill make somethin new when inspiration hits me like a brick in the back of the head...(in a week or two,or when i see shadow next) |
| 06-19-2004, 07:44 PM | #5 |
His torso looks funny, and the way his belt is drawn looks weird as well. And his right leg looks longer than his left leg (Maybe this is just me, but I dunno). Apart from that, I really like his face's expression. |
| 06-19-2004, 07:48 PM | #6 |
boxy body, hehe, reminds me of when i started drawing torso is definately wierd er, somehow, one leg seems longer than the other |
| 06-26-2004, 09:17 PM | #7 |
a human jaw can't show such teeths, indeed, its impossible that the upper jaw gets so deformated to reach the eyes. the nose should have "balls". btw, what you drew this with? a pink crayon? lmfao shadow got pink crayons. the left hand should have a more solid thumb grip, move the thumb to the left and it will be fine for my eye. the right arm have no muscles at all, it can't weild a such huge scythe. the rest is obvious, you need pratice. |
| 06-26-2004, 10:04 PM | #8 |
... i did not get pink crayons! I got red pencils and my scanner scanned light... (everyone knows my scanner sucks) (he was to lazy so i had to type his post for him) (and it wasnt based on realism i guess, more abstract) |