New character concept for my project

It have been a time since my last drawing (was very occupied in triggering and exams) but here's my lastest art. Its the first time I try with those type of eyes and im amazed at the result, her facial expression is way better than my last attemp. I'm redoing the concept of the princess and I plan to base the skin on it this time.

As you can see it's very WIP (1 or 2 hours of work and its the original paper, the lines are so sketchy at some places).

Is there any proportion issues that I should fix before adding the clothes and background?

Again, the clothes are on their way...

looks great, good anime style :D im impatient to see the final result

Added the clothes..

I dont have much idea for the background umm.. Castle? Forest? Sky?

fix up the chin, make it a little sharper
well, actually, keep it that way if she's around 25 or something
the ear looks a little wierd

other than that, i think its pretty good :D

umm hard to tell which background to use, think ill vote sky, like near a cliff its always nice and i think the chin is ok

For some reason... I think her breasts are a tad bit too low... they look like they are sagging.

It's good to have you back though... and those eyes are very nice.

icbm1987

heh.. I think if I move them higher she will look too young with very big boobs. She should be around 24 and I wanted to keep realistic proportion :P

But the main reason is it would take a lot of time to modify all that part.

I think I'll make a blurry sky or something like that.

I still don't think they would sag that far... 24 isn't exactly old... and you shouldn't be that lazy...

icbm1987

Oh wait a sec, I think I found out what is making that effect, there's a line on her chest that shouldn't be as low and as clear.

Here's the current pic. I did a quick background which may be redid.

I'll begin the shading now.

The orange bother me tho, need to find a better color.

MAYBE make the arms just a little thicker, I know shes a woman, but they still look a little thin. Like a 12 year old's arms.

lol i hope ull remake the background this will bring the pic down if u leave that quick background there

You've made quite a big improvement Dark_One, good job. I don't think her boobs are saggy, but if you are going for a more anime approach they should be lifted with invisi-bra, only used by anime women though.

Ok... I'll just say a few stuff I saw real quick.

First fix the face shape triangular is not very pretty.
2nd maybe fix the eyes and movem closer to each other that's pretty far even for anime.
3rd maybe a castle at the right and the background a waterfall.
4th Fyredaug is right thicken the arms a tad.

A tip when drawing any human like thing is to sketch out the head completly... so ur drawing's head wont have a weird shape, draw a circle for the head and continue down to draw chin and cheeks... hard to explain.

Okay I fixed the issues. Any more?

Note: The eyes will probably look weird until the rest is shaded.

EDIT: Updated the right(her left) arm.

(sry i didnt read, im ina hurry)

did someone say that her hair looks undefined and that it doesnt look like its really laying on the body?

other than that (icmb's obsessed with forumners' drawings' breasts) it looks really nice