Dark Knight? eh?

With this new thread... one more dies... limit's are evil.

Here's the complete Dark Knight... Give crits...

and I don't want any "OMG!!! WOOT!!" replies.

and give me a way to correct any problems you see.

Jester... your comments would be appreciated as well... no matter how blunt.



icbm1987

edit: god... that blade looks horrible... Blue? What was I thinking?

wow, the proportions are perfect
giv'em leather gauntlets!

Lol... wateva aznwhore (is that feng zhu art in ur avy?)

First off the lineart is of a poor quality. The sword looks really in bad shape maybe thats what u were goin for. The hand gripping the sword is a bit weird since his fingers are on the handle and shud be longer. And his arms are too long compared to his legs or vice versa since his hands goes to his knees. The cloth thing around his waist... currently it looks like a sort of skirt maybe cover it by a belt or sumthing cuz if hed move from that pose it might fall.
The coloring is not bad but the only way I explain those metal shines is that there's multiple light source... the metal effect is very nice and blue swords are cool.
Also, his shoulder section is bizarre... the shoulder pad bends as if made out of leather his breast plate should be bigger... meh the shoulder problem is hard to explain, it just seems unreallistic.

youve certainly figured out how to properly light/shade metal

the cloth thing looks like clay :/

I can only ad that the helmet makes it look like he has a flat face, I think it has something to do with the ellips you've drawn at the bottom of the helmet; it's a perspective thing I geauss but un general : not bad

The folds need work and add sum detail.

Thanks guys... I might work on it... or start something new...

doesn't anyone else notice how much the gloves and sword differ from the shading on the rest?

that blue sword is horrendous.

icbm1987

AH? THAT'S SAMUS! :o

shading on the metal parts = done perfectly, metal doesn't realy blend in together so yea..

teh cloth part... eeeeeehhhh... i dunno what to say. but more shading on the wrinkled parts to define that the clothe is wrinkled, or waving in the wind.

I hate shading soft matierials...

and yeah... his arms are waaayyy too long... whoops.

I just didn't want to draw the codpiece... so I put the loin cloth in there... which wasn't a great idea.

icbm1987

are you gonna redo it?

(make thy sword a different color)

maybe... maybe not...

I know I will apply what I've learned to my other work though.

icbm1987

No, they REALLY aren't perfect.....


Though, it's the best drawing I ever saw from Icbm.

BEHOLD!! Your Lord and Master has arrived!

Ha... One must improve I guess. Thanks bro, thanks.

icbm1987

I don't know what to say (but then again I never do) . . . looks good. The sword kind of seems like the end's been snapped off, with that jagged edge.