my first time terraining

wow ok well this is my first time ever doing something like this. i meen ive made maps and all but ive never really just did a "terrain". ok well here it is its kinda like a ruin/lagoon type thing. i accidently did to small a map so i couldnt really make the waterfall look real from the top view well thats all. hope the pics dont take to long to load :D
Plz give comments/contructive criticism!!! also remember this is my first time ^_^

It's actually not bad for first time serious terraining, could use some SKY, some FOG and WEATHER. Aside from that the tile variation is ok, there is a few floating doodads I see (have to be real careful puttin rocks on non flat terrain). Maybe retint the waterfalls to match the darker blue water it feeds into, and you can't go wrong with adding more environmental doodads. Overall its a good start - I want to see more pics ^_^

hmm i only see one possible floating rock and thats the one in the waterfall to the right that u can see it thru the water otheriwse the ones in the bottom arent actually floating and yes like 2 or 3 waterfalls are ill add some weather and stuff and fix up a few things :D
EDIT: AGGGGGGGGGGGG im the stupidist person ever i just checked and holy crap i forgot to save....ok well now im pissed at myself well neway now to start a new one

Actually it was the rock on the sandy beach floating, and now you get to do it better! I forgot to mention how about some tree variation, different heights/sizes and types of trees are nice.

actually it is variated butttttttt u cant really see it...sigh well i guess ill have to do it over. ohwell ill start on it as soon as im not doing work my teachers are giving out for no reason cuz its the end of school. well thx for the criticism/comments im glad u liked it well now its gonna be ven better MUWHAHAAHA and this time ill make it so its not just a puddle of water cuz i did a 34x34 map lol. well hope to post it soon ^_^ :D

Great for a first time terrain!
But what you need to do is to variate the tiles that's in the set, it could also use a few more enviromental doodads, overall great for a first terrain, 4/5

Vagabond-

For a first time terrain, it's very good. Thou, I'd encourage you to use the tiles alittle more, and... so to say, "clumping" the doodads - if you look at a ordinary sea anywhere you'll see that lilypads seldom spread all over the sea, but rather clump together in some small corner somewhere...

OK im done well heres the new pic from the way i look at it i find it MUCH better then my last one. well i have like 3 different angels and 3 weather effects:
>light rays
>fog
>rain

well hope u all like it and again comments/criticism is wanted ^_^ :D

Well, it looks quite the same, but the improvements you've made, tile addings, weather effects etc makes it look much better, great work, but why is there an island in the middle of a sea or something with a waterfall that's kinda sprouts out from nowhere, that's abit wierd I think, just my oppinion though.

Vagabond-

...well theres islands all over the sea and its not really the sea i just had to put water there so i could raise and make the smooth beachy kinda look and about the waterfall im just lazy and didnt make a lil stream leadin up to it. and its supposed to look the same its the same idea i just tried to recreate it with the new modifications i wasnt trying to make something different just better. but neway thx for that :D

i think it looks best with the rain effect ... anyway... the waterfalls dont look natural ... also you should add more seaweed to fill the waterc a bit ... without it looks kinda ... empty

but its much better than most newby terraining attempts i've seen