| 06-16-2004, 04:51 PM | #1 |
Really wasn't happy with the pic i entered into MC2, so i tried doin' it over. Its still kinda loose and WIPish. Please give me some C&C though, i really need it. Especially need help with making the tree trunk he's holding look like a tree trunk. |
| 06-16-2004, 05:07 PM | #2 |
Well, I'd make your drawing small enough so that people could see the cylindrical part of the log, rather than just the cut-off end. Also, right now it's difficult to visually seperate the arm from the body (that is an arm crossed over the chest to help support the log, right?) |
| 06-16-2004, 05:14 PM | #3 |
Yeah, i realized that about the arm (it is an arm) but figured that after i colored it there wouldn't be as much confusion. And about making the pic smaller; while that is an option, i didn't want to have to make the pic over again. But looks like that's what i'll be doin' hah. Thank you. Any other crits anyone? |
| 06-17-2004, 08:33 AM | #4 |
was about to say the same thing about that arm, other than that only got an idea, i think u could leave it like that and make new arms its actually look like a plate armor (look good) oh and btw he remind me of Ozzy in chrono trigger lol, thats funny |
| 06-18-2004, 01:57 AM | #5 |
i dont get the little gremliny monster person.and the circle thingy is a log...i never would have guessed...sorry man,but u...like me,have a long way to go. :( |