the armor needs a lot more shading... and i mean a lot... it looks like he is armored with cardboard... sorry but its true. there are some great metal tuts in the techniques factory.
other then that cloth could use more folding. more shading in genaral and the face could use a makeover... (i hate it when people dont change the face >''<)
and u need to have shade 'underneath' the armor so it actually looks like its on top of the rest.
I didnt know the armor looked that bad, I thought it was pretty good. (I dont like the one in the skin factory b/c its never how i want it to look.) for the folds, yea I know there needs to be more, and yes I am re-working the face just for the moment I havent changed anything.