concept sketch

a quick concerpt sketch for a campaign that may go ahead

looks good but the eye needs to stand out more
why dont you pyut it in the masterscontest

ive never been very good with eyes, but dont i need to model and skin as well to enter the master conest?

I dont know, I hope not? I want in too

entering the concept art section of the master contest does not require moddeling or skinning skills-- just art skills.

entering the model part njeeds model skills
entering the skinning part needs skinning skills.

Yea... just listen to Erwt.

And I think you need to work on definition in the drawing... some thicker line weight would be nice on the outside... and then as the details get smaller you should go with less.

The piece lacks a "focus" or a place that your eye is drawn to.

If you are going to enter the MC... then make sure that your drawing is shaded well.

icbm1987

in a bid to make this more foucused, im going to try and find my oil pastals, and add a background. ive never really been able to do shading, so i attempt my own version which is a frenzied scrabble with a biro, so probaly wont be entering the master contest, my drawing rarely have any kind of foucus, they just happen when ive had enough coffee, thanks for the advice :D

heres my second for tonight, inspired more by lewis arol thank my last. ive been trying to imporove my shadeing but unsucsefully so far, but i tried to have thicker lines round the edge
for some reason my scanners makeing these look very light


I know parts appear unshaded but it is supposed to appear mechanical

DON'T put thicker lines just around the edges work em into the body as well
And the eye leave some more white in it
And i love the legs they're great, but just one suggestion when your working with that medium: leave the parts that are further away less worked on so it will give more depth and make it more readable

i thought i should make the bits behind look darker, so i ended up just scribbleing more on them, but your right, it dose make the whole thing look flat, its another one of those bad habbits ive gotten into

lmao the first drawing makes me remember marilyn manson beceause of it's tail
the second drawing have badass legs, but there is some troubles with the wings , there is only one row of feathers from my view. make it look like there is a reasonnable amount of feathers, they can be boring to draw but its the first thing i noticed that was wrong.
indeed.
you draw weird, and i would like to see more drawings from you. keep praticing!

well this should be my last sketch for tonight as ive got 2 chemisty exams tomorow, its still very WIP, a ned to ad some kind of background, and work on the tree a lot

please tell what your drawing means- or what it is please
a tree getting blowed up by wind, next to a column?
my comment is that the tree would need less harsh lines.
i cant really say anything on this drawing

ok, exactly ewhat is see i dont translayte into my drawing, its a tree geting blown next to some big wooooshy thing, im not quite sure what. like i said, i just draw what i see
i guess it supposed ot be some big flowing nexus of tormented souls kinda thing, but im not a qualified psychiatrist, so i cant make a reasonable judgement on what it really is