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I'm rusty so give me a break. Heres an Undead Blademaster. He is suppose to be clan orientated. Blue and Grey just popped in my mind give me ideas. I didnt do the flagpole or sword yet or the neckless. Hows it look. I know theres too much blood I'm gonna fix it.

Oh yea heres the wrap

the muscles are cool, but the blue wich I presumes is cloth could look more like cloth.
and do something cool with the sword
and were did the ponytail come from?

face and body are perfect and there is too much blood imo

Sponge down the green more. and hes right about the fabric i just dunno how 2 do it

The tattered clothes on his upper body don't look right.
There should be more and it should have holes in it.
Also the pieces you have now don't look as if they are hanging off his shoulders. They almost look like they are lying on a flat surface.
Still good though :D

Are you gunna do something to that sword?

I'll do fixes later I'm not sure what to do with the sword any ideas?

Make the sword look cracked

sword should be old (cracked, etc)

i think it (sword) should be like a long scimitar, keep the front the same shape, and just cut out a curved portion of the back via alpha. otherwise, make it like with cracks, and maybe some chips off of the edges, to make it jagged and kinda like a weapon that tears flesh off rather than merely slices thru it

he looks like a war-weary blademaster with blue-gray fur.
for detail 8\10 (though wip)
for stuff i like 5\10 (but who cares what i like anyways. . .)

it needs more shading around the edges of the cloth, so it looks more like its draped on it, right now it looks kinda bad. the flesh looks verry cool though.

crack the sword, make some cracks, add some skulls... whatever just change it ;)

heres idea for the sword with cracks and rust good luck with skin btw

alphaing the sword causes problems I'll explain later. Updates soon.