| 06-24-2004, 08:35 PM | #1 |
Here are two other small terraining projects I've been working on for my RPG... The island pic has a small story behind it... Their ship crashed and they had to take a rowboat to shore. They soon found that it was a mutated island where everything was big!! The survivors constructed a small home from any availabe trees and bushes and have been living there for some time now. ![]() |
| 06-24-2004, 10:52 PM | #2 |
Critique plz? |
| 06-24-2004, 11:33 PM | #3 |
why is your island square? appart from that quite nice, but you could loose the vastly oversized shell. the town pics are nice, considering how few doodads youve used, one thing i could suggest (that incidently i dont think ive ever seen before) is makeing all the plantlife (shrubs cattils ect) a rewalistic size, and just haveing a lot more of them, than adding a few small trees |
| 06-25-2004, 11:27 AM | #4 |
Thats not a shell... its a big piece of coral... ;) |
| 06-25-2004, 12:16 PM | #5 |
0_o that's a square island.. I don't think any real island should look like that.. besides from that it's good, could use some fog and a sky. Some other tiles should also be good to see. And the city.. it could use some fixup, like shrubs that large does never grow in a city, and if it does the villager should cut them down, but it still is good. Vagabond- ![]() |
| 06-26-2004, 01:54 AM | #6 |
well like they gitlich and vagabond said the island needs to not be square, and the coral, if u really want it, put it in the water, like real coral,(needs to be inwater to survive)the town i like, the shrus are a bit big, overall nice job ![]() |
| 07-01-2004, 08:54 PM | #7 |
Yup. Just make that island a bit more oval-ish and get out the brush hog for that town and you will have some pretty sharp terrains going. ![]() |
